RoughRiders9 Posted January 1, 2012 Share Posted January 1, 2012 This is a part of my fictional sports expansion project where I expanded each of the four major league sports to 40 teams. I promised my friend, who is from Arkansas, that I'll design the teams that he added in Arkansas for him. So here is the NBA team from Arkansas!The reason why I chose Pippen because he attended the University of Central Arkansas. Thoughts? C+C would be appreciated! Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted January 1, 2012 Share Posted January 1, 2012 This sounds like an interesting project. The jerseys look fine. Is the wordmark also the primary logo? If so, it needs at least one or two more elements to be complete. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
csura999 Posted January 1, 2012 Share Posted January 1, 2012 This sounds like an interesting project. The jerseys look fine. Is the wordmark also the primary logo? If so, it needs at least one or two more elements to be complete.I agree. How about a basketball? I know many teams do it, but it'll add another element that'll make the logo pop you know? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoughRiders9 Posted January 1, 2012 Author Share Posted January 1, 2012 As per jaha32's suggestion:Do you think that is better? That will be the primary mark, while the logos that you see on the uniforms are just the wordmarks. And as to jaha, I'm not trying to step onto your boundaries, but after seeing your new league creation of the EBA, it really inspired me to go out and make some logos for a few of my expansion teams. Thanks man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTernup Posted January 1, 2012 Share Posted January 1, 2012 I like it, but the white jersey looks different without silver. Also it looks a little like the hawks jerseys. My only problem with this set is the white jersey. Denver Nuggets Kansas City Chiefs Tampa Bay Rays Colorado Buffaloes Purdue Boilermakers Florida Gators Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoughRiders9 Posted January 1, 2012 Author Share Posted January 1, 2012 The Atlanta Hawks, you mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raymie Posted January 1, 2012 Share Posted January 1, 2012 I could totally see a backstory where their look is rather generic because of PC (Arizona had a high school with a Rebels mascot that changed to Jaguars in the early 90s ? it was very Black by that point). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoughRiders9 Posted January 1, 2012 Author Share Posted January 1, 2012 I like it, but the white jersey looks different without silver. Also it looks a little like the hawks jerseys. My only problem with this set is the white jersey.As per his suggestion: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bucknut40 Posted January 2, 2012 Share Posted January 2, 2012 I like the uniforms and the word mark nicely done #RaiderUpTwitter-@R_Redinger4 My Blog-Southwest Ohio Football NCFAF-Wheeling Coal Miners,NCFAF-FCS Lake Erie Shoremen, NCFAB-Wheeling Coal Miners Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spearhead Posted January 2, 2012 Share Posted January 2, 2012 An actual Rebel for the logo would be great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted January 2, 2012 Share Posted January 2, 2012 Do you think that is better? That will be the primary mark, while the logos that you see on the uniforms are just the wordmarks. And as to jaha, I'm not trying to step onto your boundaries, but after seeing your new league creation of the EBA, it really inspired me to go out and make some logos for a few of my expansion teams. Thanks man!Hey there are no boundaries. You're free to make concepts..as long as someone doesnt blatantly steal an idea of mine. Go ahead, have fun!On to this concept, I still feel like the ball could interact with the wordmark better. The style of the ball doesnt match that of the wordmark IMO. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoughRiders9 Posted January 2, 2012 Author Share Posted January 2, 2012 Do you think that is better? That will be the primary mark, while the logos that you see on the uniforms are just the wordmarks. And as to jaha, I'm not trying to step onto your boundaries, but after seeing your new league creation of the EBA, it really inspired me to go out and make some logos for a few of my expansion teams. Thanks man!Hey there are no boundaries. You're free to make concepts..as long as someone doesnt blatantly steal an idea of mine. Go ahead, have fun!On to this concept, I still feel like the ball could interact with the wordmark better. The style of the ball doesnt match that of the wordmark IMO.How would you make it match the wordmark? I haven't done a lot of basketball concepts so I'm somewhat new in this field...thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted January 2, 2012 Share Posted January 2, 2012 Do you think that is better? That will be the primary mark, while the logos that you see on the uniforms are just the wordmarks. And as to jaha, I'm not trying to step onto your boundaries, but after seeing your new league creation of the EBA, it really inspired me to go out and make some logos for a few of my expansion teams. Thanks man!Hey there are no boundaries. You're free to make concepts..as long as someone doesnt blatantly steal an idea of mine. Go ahead, have fun!On to this concept, I still feel like the ball could interact with the wordmark better. The style of the ball doesnt match that of the wordmark IMO.How would you make it match the wordmark? I haven't done a lot of basketball concepts so I'm somewhat new in this field...thanksFirst of all, I think it would be nice to see the top half of the ball. It seems like the ball is suddently cut off. That might just be me though since there is no rule saying you have to show ball as a complete circle. Also, try a red ball with a nice black outline equal in thickness to the black around REBELS, and then black lines forming the lines within the basketball. Those two things might help. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
generalshepherd141 Posted June 29, 2012 Share Posted June 29, 2012 Cool. I don't know if the "Rebels" name fits basketball, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jussten Posted June 30, 2012 Share Posted June 30, 2012 Cool. I don't know if the "Rebels" name fits basketball, though. I think it'd be cool but not for the NBA. Ideally you could add a couple pistols to the logo but that wouldn't fly in the League. I like the word mark a lot. To me, it's still missing something if it's going to be a primary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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