mattwillcox Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 Portfolio Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
capitalcanuck Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 change that to flying and thats perfect for Richmond Five-lights.blogspot.com - my Motorsports Blog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MDGP Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 I'm having trouble reading the wordmark on the red alternate. Otherwise, this is excellent. Nice work! I've got a dribbble, check it out if you like my stuff; alternatively, if you hate my stuff, send it to your enemies to punish their insolence! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnrafael Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 I will ever search this template for photoshop. The Wordmark font Also.Adjust only that wordmark in Red Alt. This is Incredible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 I will ever search this template for photoshop. The Wordmark font Also.Adjust only that wordmark in Red Alt. This is Incredible.i think the font is masque Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattwillcox Posted April 10, 2012 Author Share Posted April 10, 2012 I will ever search this template for photoshop. The Wordmark font Also.Adjust only that wordmark in Red Alt. This is Incredible.i think the font is masqueYes it is, squirrels is ever so slightly edited Portfolio Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 I like it. If you ever made a minor change you could make the tail even bigger and have a little more flip at the end. And the font, Masque. I've seen it attempted and not quite done just right in dozens of concepts, but it is a fun choice here. cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missouri tigers Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 Great work, man,I think the main thing you need to address moving forward would be to trim some of his belly fat. He's looking quite jolly.Also, the tail could be a little longer.The s cap logo is by far my favorite part, really dynamic!Just a few things you may want to think about addressing in order to make this identity top-notch! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bucknut40 Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 I would like to see the squirrel with boxing gloves or something #RaiderUpTwitter-@R_Redinger4 My Blog-Southwest Ohio Football NCFAF-Wheeling Coal Miners,NCFAF-FCS Lake Erie Shoremen, NCFAB-Wheeling Coal Miners Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattwillcox Posted April 10, 2012 Author Share Posted April 10, 2012 Thanks for all of the comments guys, I've edited the first post to include the changes. I'm really happy with the way that all of your suggestions turned out. If anybody else has some ideas on how to improve either the logos or uniforms feel free to let me know. Portfolio Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joedesigns Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 This is great. Love the away logo!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MEANS Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 Very nice! A few suggestions:-the "S" away cap mark, seems a bit clunky, smooth out the curves to make it flow more-the two tone wordmark, the black split line creates a few weird areas, like the bottom white parts in the R,E,and L. I think the wordmark would look better solid, also the bottom part of the Q creates some weird kerning, maybe shorten that part a bit.-"Fightin'" also some weird kerning going on here, and I'm not sure on the H crossbar or how the T just barely touches the H, either make it really flow into the H or not touch the H-The grey on the belly should be on the bottom as well as below his mouth and chin-match your angles on the "Fightin'" and "Squirrels", imagine the I extending up into the H, that angle does not match-clean up the S and E in Squirrels https://www.andrewsterlachini.com/ or http://dribbble.com/MEANS1974 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattwillcox Posted April 11, 2012 Author Share Posted April 11, 2012 I made a few edits to the text on the primary logo (edited in first post). I also did some mock ups of the hats. Portfolio Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DomTheAthlete29 Posted April 11, 2012 Share Posted April 11, 2012 That "s" logo is a beauty! Excellent work as always. It's awesome to see the progression in your artistry during your time here! Simply superb work Matt!I echo what is said about the two toned work mark.. I feel like it doesn't work really well on the red jersey. The hats look great too btw' Someone be a World Champ, please!Fantasy Football Keeper League.....PM me if you want to join!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted April 11, 2012 Share Posted April 11, 2012 I like everything but the two-colored wordmark. I really like the S logo. I just wish there was something in the logo that made it look like a baseball logo. This doesn't scream baseball logo in anyway. Very clean and nice though. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted April 11, 2012 Share Posted April 11, 2012 Nice concept, and a great looking logo.A couple of things...-The squirrel's head could stand alone as an alt.-The "S" is good, but how would it look with the 'tail part' only on the top? Take the "S" from your wordmark and try the tail on the top red part. It might look a little less bulky, and would tie in with your wordmark. Nice work! *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FGWB Posted April 13, 2012 Share Posted April 13, 2012 Looks more like rally squirrel. Try selling this logo to the STL Cardinals.It looks good though, but doesn't say "fighting" to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 Its concepts like these that prove the number of posts don't matter about the quality of work produced. Really nice job, and a very creative S logo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alkatraz2003 Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 Very clean design, but I do agree that the head of the squirrel would make a nice secondary or even tertiary logo. Please keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattwillcox Posted April 14, 2012 Author Share Posted April 14, 2012 Thanks for all of the input guys! I'll be working on making the head secondary and I'm going to think about some other wordmark options. I probably won't be able to put some solid work into it until next week though because of school, but there will be updates to come. Portfolio Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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