Bmac Posted January 28, 2013 Share Posted January 28, 2013 I've still have a college hockey concept thread going, but I wanted to get some of my other work posted as well. I will attempt to get a concept posted for each NHL team, but we'll see how far this goes.St. Louis BluesDetroit Red Wings https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted January 28, 2013 Author Share Posted January 28, 2013 St. Louis BluesI basically started over for the Blues. The uniforms are based heavily on the pre-Edge set. The alternate is double blue with yellow music note stripes and the alternate logo. New number font to go along with the new wordmark. Primary logo stays the same, alternate logo is a remake of the old alternate logo. I threw another logo in there combining the primary logo and wordmark with the St. Louis arch, but I'm not sold on it.*EDIT- the current uniform is the most recent version, after having undergone some updates.*Link to original version*Thoughts? LIKE this post, leave a comment here or on Twitter/Facebook, whatever. Feedback is greatly appreciated. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funky Bunky Posted January 28, 2013 Share Posted January 28, 2013 I approve! Very nice BUT....It's a bit hard to read the NOB on the road jersey, and the captain's C looks a bit too high. Other than those two minor details, I like it a lot. That trumpet logo is great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GO2HELL Posted January 28, 2013 Share Posted January 28, 2013 Perfection Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted January 28, 2013 Share Posted January 28, 2013 The alternate needs five yellow stripes and not four. On another team, it wouldn't matter, but on the Blues pinstripes like that will be associated with a musical staff and therefore the number must be five. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GDLions Posted January 28, 2013 Share Posted January 28, 2013 Simple and classy. Well done sir. I do agree with aci that there should be 5 stripes on the alt. Other than that perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted January 30, 2013 Author Share Posted January 30, 2013 Here is an update for the Blues. Moved captain's C down, added a stripe to alternate, added a blue note pattern to the inside collar of the alternate. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midway Posted January 30, 2013 Share Posted January 30, 2013 I think the road needs the lighter blue to have more of a presence. The color could get completely lost in all the navy when you picture the whole uniform.That 4th logo is nothing short of perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted January 30, 2013 Share Posted January 30, 2013 I would swap the navy and the royal blue on the away, that way it will balance with the logo and numbers a little better. Other than that, this looks great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B-mer Posted January 30, 2013 Share Posted January 30, 2013 I think if you just switched the navy and blue on the shoulders on the away that'd be fine, like how they have done it since the pre-edge. Otherwise awesome set! The one thing i never understood is why is the trumpet blue? I think if you make it gold it'd look a lot better and stand out more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted January 30, 2013 Author Share Posted January 30, 2013 Thanks for the feedback so far guys. Here is update #2. Royal blue and navy have been swapped on the white jersey (how the bleep did I not think of that?!), single-color names now on the home and road. Thoughts? Good to move on? https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenGrant94 Posted January 30, 2013 Share Posted January 30, 2013 That latest update for ST. Louis looks great!!! Â stevengrantdesign.blogspot.com - Twitter:Â @StevenGrant94Â - Instagram: @stevengrant94 Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midway Posted January 31, 2013 Share Posted January 31, 2013 I have no qualms with this, let's see what else you have in store Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MDGP Posted January 31, 2013 Share Posted January 31, 2013 Beautiful, don't change a thing. I'm kinda intrigued by the numbers though. Specifically, what would the other digits look like? I've got a dribbble, check it out if you like my stuff; alternatively, if you hate my stuff, send it to your enemies to punish their insolence! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted February 2, 2013 Share Posted February 2, 2013 Looks beautiful. The only suggestions I'd make would be to make the trumpet gold, not only to stand out more, but because trumpets are gold anyways. As well, I'd stick to single-coloured NoB for the alternate. Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12   Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportstar1212 Posted February 2, 2013 Share Posted February 2, 2013 The Blues look gorgeous. I like everything about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted February 16, 2013 Author Share Posted February 16, 2013 Detroit Red WingsNothing too different here, but a few noteworthy changes:-New number font-New font for NOB, captain's C, and team wordmark.-Lace-up collars-"HOCKEYTOWN" on inside of collars-New alternate jerseyI also touched up the primary logo ever so slightly. Oh, and take note of the primary jersey being white.I know this isn't anything too exciting, but I would love some feedback on this. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cohenj21 Posted February 16, 2013 Share Posted February 16, 2013 I like this set a lot. The new font is different, but it's definitely better than the generic one they use now. The alternate is good, better than the winter classic one they had a couple years ago with the stylized D. The whole set screams "classic" and that's the vibe you should get from the Wings. Solid job. "Those who believe in telekinetics, raise my hand." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted February 18, 2013 Author Share Posted February 18, 2013 Bump...I don't expect many comments but this wasn't on the first page for very long. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midway Posted February 18, 2013 Share Posted February 18, 2013 The bookman style number font is something I've been a fan of but I'm not sure it would fly with Wings fans. I'd like to see a more bold version of it but that's about it for minor adjustments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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