tomjmerrill Posted February 12, 2013 Share Posted February 12, 2013 First time submitting to sportslogos. This is a alternate logo design I had. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illwauk Posted February 12, 2013 Share Posted February 12, 2013 I like it! I don't think the bear is quite there yet (the white mouth and black teeth is really bothering me), but I love the overall idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hathaway Browne Posted February 12, 2013 Share Posted February 12, 2013 It certainly is striking, and I'm liking it. As illwauk said, maybe switch the black and white in the mouth and its getting there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seancarter Posted February 12, 2013 Share Posted February 12, 2013 mod deleted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomjmerrill Posted February 12, 2013 Author Share Posted February 12, 2013 I was having a hard time with the colors also seeing how there is only 3 to choose from. Ill try switching some and see what I come up with, Thanks for the feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted February 12, 2013 Share Posted February 12, 2013 I was having a hard time with the colors also seeing how there is only 3 to choose from. Ill try switching some and see what I come up with, Thanks for the feedback!Should be able to pull of a black mouth with yellow outilines & white teeth I believe My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted February 12, 2013 Share Posted February 12, 2013 love it! i'm with illwauk though, the mouth is a little awkward Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomjmerrill Posted February 12, 2013 Author Share Posted February 12, 2013 Updated with the mouth looking a lot better thanks to the feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigRed618 Posted February 12, 2013 Share Posted February 12, 2013 don't mess with bruins logoHe said this was for an alternate logo. Calm down.@tom: Now you got it. One of the best Bruins concepts I've seen. If anything, I'd like to see how the bear would look without the wheel behind it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomjmerrill Posted February 13, 2013 Author Share Posted February 13, 2013 @BigRed Here is just the Bear with a gold mouth instead of the black. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevinjohnpost Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 Great job! At the moment it looks pretty good but it doesn't look like a finished product to me. The mouth looks good but the shape of the head doesn't seem right. It looks a little too narrow. Also the absence of an ear seems off. For some perspective, here’s a picture of a bear I think will help you get the shape right.P.S. That color of yellow you’re currently using looks very “mustard-y.” Try this: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomjmerrill Posted February 13, 2013 Author Share Posted February 13, 2013 Thanks Ill try that color, when I export the image my gold does turn kinda "mustard" yellow. I had an ear on the right but it just threw off everything cause it was just sticking out. I am going for a really simplistic look with sharp lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomjmerrill Posted February 13, 2013 Author Share Posted February 13, 2013 @Kevin I tried your gold and it seems a bit to bright, im going to have to find a color just in between yours and mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevinjohnpost Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 Here's the official colors.http://s950.photobucket.com/albums/ad347/ColorWerx/Hockey/NationalHockeyLeague/Colors/Solid/BostonBruins_FRC_9999_SCC_SRGB.png Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomjmerrill Posted February 13, 2013 Author Share Posted February 13, 2013 I think it looks much better with those colors, here's the updated version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 right now the lines around the mouth area are too thin & throwing off the logo overall also an ear shape would improve & the bear is a little out of center My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FGM13 Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 Maybe just the bear, because now it looks a little crowded GO OILERS-GO BLUE JAYS-GO ESKIMOS-GO COLTS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bayne Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 right now the lines around the mouth area are too thin & throwing off the logo overall also an ear shape would improve & the bear is a little out of centerAgreed. I like this quite a bit but the thin lines around the mouth need to be thicker and more confident. Even the black outline around the bears' head should really almost (but not quite) be as thick as the lines in the background part of the logo.Right now the head is a little bottom right corner, so it needs to go towards the top left a bit. This might mean that the nose overlaps the circle, but I think that would be a good thing.Definitely keep the white teeth and black mouth. A white/yellow mouth looks too much like a negative. I'm Danny fkn Heatley, I play for myself. That's what fkn all stars do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FUNKAFIED Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 The head looks more like a gorilla than a bear, but that's probably because the ears are missing. The whole "roar" idea is awesome. I'm excited to see it once it's dialed in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomjmerrill Posted February 13, 2013 Author Share Posted February 13, 2013 Thanks everyone for the feedback, as I stated this is my first submission to the sports logos forums. This community is awesome! Ill take what you have all said and do some more tweaking today. Thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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