grant1woods Posted May 23, 2013 Share Posted May 23, 2013 They are called the New York Apple Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grant1woods Posted May 23, 2013 Author Share Posted May 23, 2013 http://s1313.photobucket.com/user/grant1woods/media/NewYorkApple_zpsba27ed1d.png.html?sort=3&o=0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Old School Fool Posted May 24, 2013 Share Posted May 24, 2013 Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Coast2CoastAM2006 Posted May 24, 2013 Share Posted May 24, 2013 Spoilers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevinmets Posted May 24, 2013 Share Posted May 24, 2013 The image files won't load at work, but I like the concept! I wouldn't use Apple as the name, that's too closely related to Mets-culture. Maybe Gothams, Knights, Skyscrapers, Shadows, ...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pittsburghsports16 Posted May 24, 2013 Share Posted May 24, 2013 Really good critique guys. He's obviously new, and this is how you treat him? How the hell do you expect him to be encouraged to continue making concepts with such crap C&C. Would you have wanted this after you made your first concept? This is why the concept forum has been going down the tubes over the years. Eager new talent gets shot down immediately by some power-tripping elitists who think they're crap didn't stink when they started either.The New York Apple logo on the cap is very creative. However, try to find some better scripts/numbers to use. The ones you have here are too plain. Also, try to expand your overall identity. There's not much to work with right now. Keep up with the Apples motif though. It fits New York, maybe not as a MLB team, but certainly a minor league one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grant1woods Posted May 24, 2013 Author Share Posted May 24, 2013 Really good critique guys. He's obviously new, and this is how you treat him? How the hell do you expect him to be encouraged to continue making concepts with such crap C&C. Would you have wanted this after you made your first concept? This is why the concept forum has been going down the tubes over the years. Eager new talent gets shot down immediately by some power-tripping elitists who think they're crap didn't stink when they started either.The New York Apple logo on the cap is very creative. However, try to find some better scripts/numbers to use. The ones you have here are too plain. Also, try to expand your overall identity. There's not much to work with right now. Keep up with the Apples motif though. It fits New York, maybe not as a MLB team, but certainly a minor league one.Thanks Man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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OfficialBailey7 Posted May 25, 2013 Share Posted May 25, 2013 White bills are a no. Change the font and make the jerseys white (for home) and make your own design. After this you will have a nice start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spanky8992 Posted May 25, 2013 Share Posted May 25, 2013 Really good critique guys. He's obviously new, and this is how you treat him? How the hell do you expect him to be encouraged to continue making concepts with such crap C&C. Would you have wanted this after you made your first concept? This is why the concept forum has been going down the tubes over the years. Eager new talent gets shot down immediately by some power-tripping elitists who think they're crap didn't stink when they started either.The New York Apple logo on the cap is very creative. However, try to find some better scripts/numbers to use. The ones you have here are too plain. Also, try to expand your overall identity. There's not much to work with right now. Keep up with the Apples motif though. It fits New York, maybe not as a MLB team, but certainly a minor league one. He googled New York Apple for the logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevinmets Posted May 25, 2013 Share Posted May 25, 2013 Yeah the idea was much better than the execution. Disappointed not to see a cool new "3rd New York baseball team" concept I could get behind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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