DawgPacPBH Posted August 29, 2013 Share Posted August 29, 2013 Was just sketching and came up with a basic jet and its been refined a few times, so this is where I'm at with it. Thoughts? peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbaker19 Posted August 29, 2013 Share Posted August 29, 2013 I like it so far, but I personally think it may look better if it wasn't flying up, but to the side. It would probably look better on a helmet that way. The wordmark and colors are nice. Thanks Dolphins91 for the jersey avatars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xodius Posted August 29, 2013 Share Posted August 29, 2013 I'm not sure I like the jetstreams, but everything else if very, very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shmee Posted August 29, 2013 Share Posted August 29, 2013 With it pointing straight up, all I can think is "rocket ship" instead of "jet fighter." I echo the previous sentiment about trying it turned. It's well rendered, though! The world's foremost practitioners of professional tag-team wrestling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soarindude Posted August 29, 2013 Share Posted August 29, 2013 Maybe even make it pointed diagnoal, or sideways. Up just looks weird. The actual design though, good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFuture Posted August 29, 2013 Share Posted August 29, 2013 I like it so far, but here are a few more suggestions:-Italicize/skew/slant the text further (probably out to about 15-20 degrees)-Consider adding small trail lines to the left to indicate motion-Instead of an upward view of the jet, show a side view of the jet flying to the right. Rarely are people in a position to look down on a jet.-Slant the "New York" at the same angle you choose to slant the "Jets"Despite those things, I think this is a very good logo and a very good draft. I could see it as a big merchandise mover. My only question is what you'd put on the helmet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted August 29, 2013 Share Posted August 29, 2013 i'd brighten the green a bit more to be more kelly green, if it's going to be paired with black. i'd also suggest rotating it 90 degrees for use on the helmet.the helmet, btw, is something i'd really like to see. i'm picturing white helmet, green facemask, jets flying towards the front. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted August 29, 2013 Author Share Posted August 29, 2013 Definitely not a bad idea to brighten the green. Here were my helmet ideas. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayman Posted August 29, 2013 Share Posted August 29, 2013 I agree with everyone else. If you do a side view of your jet but in the direction of the one in the late 70s-late 90s it would look that much better.The white helmet is superb! For the green, maybe its the highlight but the jet blends into the green helmet too much. I know you tried but the charocal/dark grey would give it more contrast I believe.Great work either way! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windell918 Posted August 30, 2013 Share Posted August 30, 2013 Just an idea: try conecting the back two jet streams to form a "y". Thr front two kind of already form a lowercase "n" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GotPixels Posted August 30, 2013 Share Posted August 30, 2013 Definitely not a bad idea to brighten the green. Here were my helmet ideas. I think you need to rotate the Jet clockwise. By doing this, the streams could wrap and meet in the back. Really nice looking Jet. Old Dog Learning New Tricks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted August 30, 2013 Author Share Posted August 30, 2013 What if we did something crazy like this? peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted August 30, 2013 Share Posted August 30, 2013 Now its crossing into the territory of fantastic ideas that can never be done because of "tradition." I LOVE it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted August 30, 2013 Share Posted August 30, 2013 What if we did something crazy like this?We have the best helmet in the league, of course! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TylerG Posted August 30, 2013 Share Posted August 30, 2013 So awesome. Can't wait to see the jerseys if you do them. NHL Uniform Matchup Database --- TylerG's NHL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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