suplauren Posted September 26, 2013 Share Posted September 26, 2013 I like the linework on the top one and where you put the shading, but I like the coloring more on the second one. Very cool! laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted September 26, 2013 Share Posted September 26, 2013 That second one on the latest update is brilliant. Great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted September 26, 2013 Share Posted September 26, 2013 Changed the eye color & altered bottom one to have black around the eye.Lets get this on te second pageThe bottom one is killer. You have the black feathers of the actual bird, and then the purple accents it so nice and gives a dark look with the gold popping it.On a side note, was the current Ravens logo designed by Nike? I know there's that conspiracy about how they hid a check in the Broncos logo, but there is one on the beak of the Raven. Those bastards. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAWeaver Posted September 26, 2013 Share Posted September 26, 2013 Changed the eye color & altered bottom one to have black around the eye.Lets get this on te second pageThe bottom one is killer. You have the black feathers of the actual bird, and then the purple accents it so nice and gives a dark look with the gold popping it.On a side note, was the current Ravens logo designed by Nike? I know there's that conspiracy about how they hid a check in the Broncos logo, but there is one on the beak of the Raven. Those bastards. Wasn't the Broncos logo supposedly designed by Nike as well with the swoosh/check being the nostril of the horse? @loganaweaver - Twitter / @loganaweaver - Instagram / Nike Vapor Untouchable Football Template / Logan's Logos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted September 27, 2013 Share Posted September 27, 2013 Changed the eye color & altered bottom one to have black around the eye.Lets get this on te second pageThe bottom one is killer. You have the black feathers of the actual bird, and then the purple accents it so nice and gives a dark look with the gold popping it.On a side note, was the current Ravens logo designed by Nike? I know there's that conspiracy about how they hid a check in the Broncos logo, but there is one on the beak of the Raven. Those bastards. Wasn't the Broncos logo supposedly designed by Nike as well with the swoosh/check being the nostril of the horse?I like the second one but maybe try reducing the purple a little on the beak to just be highlights My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TShaw528 Posted September 27, 2013 Share Posted September 27, 2013 Id recommend making the purple a little brighter so it stands out more. From a distance I don't think the people highlights would be distinguishable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCRagnar Posted September 27, 2013 Share Posted September 27, 2013 Great update!!! The second one is great, but would it be possible to change the beak to black? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted September 27, 2013 Share Posted September 27, 2013 Bottom one. Definitely this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted September 27, 2013 Author Share Posted September 27, 2013 Thank you all for the feedback! I will take your suggestions & try to put together a couple more. https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted September 27, 2013 Author Share Posted September 27, 2013 I lightened up the purple & made some mods to the beak. https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generic Posted September 27, 2013 Share Posted September 27, 2013 Just curve the eye and which ever lines gliding along it and we're gold, great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted September 28, 2013 Author Share Posted September 28, 2013 Thanks Generic. As for your suggestion..are you referring to the top part of the eye? https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generic Posted September 28, 2013 Share Posted September 28, 2013 Yes I am, simply for the fact it looks odd with the straight line. If the line was curved and had more flow, it'd look more natural, blended and apart of the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted September 28, 2013 Author Share Posted September 28, 2013 OK thanks! https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted September 28, 2013 Author Share Posted September 28, 2013 https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted September 28, 2013 Share Posted September 28, 2013 It looks kind of faded now, to me. I liked the darker purple better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TShaw528 Posted September 29, 2013 Share Posted September 29, 2013 I like the lighter purple! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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