@UniformDesigns Posted March 23, 2014 Share Posted March 23, 2014 Amazing job but on the Orlando helmet take the O off and leave the logo it looks kinda busy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LoneStarBear Posted March 23, 2014 Share Posted March 23, 2014 I'm calling bull****. No, seriously...Wow that is way to similar, the back and shading are nearly identical, but I assure you i would never intentionally plagiarize. Here are some of the reference images I used when making the logo.I also referenced the redbulls logo.You can see similar shading along the backs of both of these images. Nevertheless I will definitely be taking mine down and reworking it until I can comfortably call it my own. Thank you for bringing this to my attention and I hope this incident doesn't taint the opinion on the rest of my work.I don't think you have anything to worry about, man. The pose is very similar but that's where the similarities end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jvelleu Posted March 25, 2014 Author Share Posted March 25, 2014 Heres a preview of the New Jersey Generals, full identity coming soon along with the Denver Gold and tweaked Bulls logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BAT-77 Posted March 25, 2014 Share Posted March 25, 2014 A very interesting project. Where can I find the models of t-shirts that you used on Behance?http://graphicburger.com/t-shirt-mockup-psd/The whole site is great, lots of useful stuff.Thanks!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jvelleu Posted March 26, 2014 Author Share Posted March 26, 2014 New Jersey GeneralsFull project HEREhttps://www.behance.net/gallery/New-Jersey-Generals/15608491 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jvelleu Posted March 26, 2014 Author Share Posted March 26, 2014 Also here a Bulls update with tweaked highlights and a reversed tail.Full project HEREhttps://www.behance.net/gallery/Jacksonville-Bulls/14727333 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jvelleu Posted March 26, 2014 Author Share Posted March 26, 2014 Denver GoldFull Project HEREhttps://www.behance.net/gallery/Denver-Gold/15617983 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrano123 Posted March 27, 2014 Share Posted March 27, 2014 I like both sets. Especially with the generals. You even kept the classic look with Denver. You're doing a great job and keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jvelleu Posted March 27, 2014 Author Share Posted March 27, 2014 So I've started working on the Gunslingers, but before I continue, does this look legible enough to everyone?Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NCCoachArete Posted March 27, 2014 Share Posted March 27, 2014 Looks a little blurry? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jvelleu Posted March 27, 2014 Author Share Posted March 27, 2014 Looks a little blurry?That would just have to do with the image quality if anything. I more talking about whether the blue stripe in the middle made it hard to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NCCoachArete Posted March 27, 2014 Share Posted March 27, 2014 Ok. I'm wondering if your blue is too light? This looks like Tulane's color palet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrano123 Posted March 27, 2014 Share Posted March 27, 2014 I mean you get used to it after a while. But at first it's like "woah". But yes it is legible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jvelleu Posted March 28, 2014 Author Share Posted March 28, 2014 OK, heres what I have for San Antonio, but something seems off to me... I cant decide whether its the colors, the complexity, or the composition. Some C&C is definitely for this one.Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NCCoachArete Posted March 28, 2014 Share Posted March 28, 2014 Just my take...too close to the Tulane school look. Why not go old school San Antonio colors, but with updated logo and uniform set? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted March 28, 2014 Share Posted March 28, 2014 The curved handles on the guns look weird... Good look, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
generalshepherd141 Posted March 28, 2014 Share Posted March 28, 2014 I think the light blue isn't good for a team with a weapon in their nickname.I would go back to the old Gunslingers' color scheme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seancarter Posted March 28, 2014 Share Posted March 28, 2014 love what you did with gunslingers concept never did like cartoon sports logo gunslingers use in 80's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ted Cunningham Posted March 28, 2014 Share Posted March 28, 2014 I think the colors are A-OK and the logo is well-rendered.The thing that's a little "off" for how I'm reading it is the shape of the blue streak through the wordmark. It seems almost redundant to have the streak itself curved/arched and then have the wordmark further arched. That "double arching" (for lack of a better term) wouldn't be so noticeable if the blue streak wasn't placed right through those decorative points on the characters. For instance, that makes the two Gs look different since the streak is different thicknesses depending on what part of the word it's in.The only other thing that maybe off is that the Alamo is only an outline and has no green on it. That's a little odd to my eyes. But it's minor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizznick Posted March 30, 2014 Share Posted March 30, 2014 It seems Im a bit stuck on the Breakers. I've finished the word mark and uniforms, but I cant get the logo right. I really want the include the boston light, the lighthouse in boston harbor, but my logos keep looking a little too soccer-crest-ish. Im trying to avoid just doing a generic wave, but Id love some suggestions on what other people think would look good. Heres a preview of the word mark and possible helmet (could go with or without logo)I would suggest a silver helmet with a blue breaking waves logo with a white facemask. realclearpolitics.com "Political tags - such as royalist, communist, democrat, populist, fascist, liberal, conservative, and so forth - are never basic criteria. The human race divides politically into those who want people to be controlled and those who have no such desire." - Robert A. Heinlein Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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