Lee Noire Posted April 15, 2014 Share Posted April 15, 2014 It's your project so I won't badger you about it, but I think the Jags shield looks good there. As far as the white outline on the numbers of the orange jersey, they work but are inconsistent with the numbers on the other jerseys. Those don't have an outline at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RO_ Posted April 16, 2014 Author Share Posted April 16, 2014 It's your project so I won't badger you about it, but I think the Jags shield looks good there. As far as the white outline on the numbers of the orange jersey, they work but are inconsistent with the numbers on the other jerseys. Those don't have an outline at all.That was my main reasoning for leaving the outline off the orange jersey in the first place, I like it with and without but I'm leaning more towards keeping the numbers consistent.Well since I'm a quarter of the way through this redesign and there are a lot of broken links scattered about, I thought I'd post all the teams I've completed in one place.Miami Dolphins:View the entire set here:Minnesota Vikings:View the entire set here:Dallas Cowboys:View the entire set here:Tampa Bay Buccaneers:View the entire set here:Pittsburgh Steelers:View the entire set here:Jacksonville Jaguars:View the entire set here:Chicago Bears:View the entire set here:Cleveland Browns:View the entire set here:And in case you're interested, here are all of my discarded designs. I like to keep them around to see the progression.Like this one:See the rest here:As always, thanks for all the great feedback everyone. Hope to have another team up soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lee Noire Posted April 16, 2014 Share Posted April 16, 2014 That is a good looking league. If only it were real. I also noticed the variety of color among the teams you posted. Its a shame most leagues are so full of r/w/b teams when its a whole rainbow available. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RO_ Posted April 16, 2014 Author Share Posted April 16, 2014 Yeah there are a lot of great color schemes out there, it's too bad blue and red is so common. I'm definitely making it a point to differentiate all of the blue and red teams when I get to them, as well as giving teams with really muddy color palettes brighter ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RO_ Posted April 19, 2014 Author Share Posted April 19, 2014 Next up, the Carolina Panthers:-Dropped silver from their color scheme, the team's colors are now only black and Carolina blue.-Black helmet, their new logo just looks like it was made for one-The 'blackout' look becomes their primary home. They are one of the teams that I think would pull it off.-New stripes featuring 'slashes' similar to their wordmark.Home:Away:Home alt:Away alt:Blue jersey options:Thanks for looking! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SG89 Posted April 19, 2014 Share Posted April 19, 2014 I like the Carolina striping pattern a lot more than their currents. You've done a good job on all of these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gator71 Posted April 19, 2014 Share Posted April 19, 2014 Maybe I missed a memo on this but is there a reason only the "A" in Panthers has the three pronged slash mark on the wordmark? Why not the other letters that have the single notch? Other than that the only thing that gets me is that the set looks kinda clunky with the striping. It doesn't give me the sleekness feeling I get when I think of a panther. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAWeaver Posted April 19, 2014 Share Posted April 19, 2014 I like this look for Carolina, but I think you could've stretched the striping onto the collar area. Based off of what Oregon did with the new template, they used the feather pattern on the collar. I think this would look good if you extended the striping onto the collar. @loganaweaver - Twitter / @loganaweaver - Instagram / Nike Vapor Untouchable Football Template / Logan's Logos  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted April 19, 2014 Share Posted April 19, 2014 Love the concept, but I'm not liking the number font Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sean F&F Posted April 20, 2014 Share Posted April 20, 2014 Love the concept, but I'm not liking the number fontI agree. Great uniform design, but the numbers are too round compared to the sharp angles and edges of the design. https://fandfsports.wordpress.com/Hockey Uniform Templates (Gimp/Photoshop) http://seanff.deviantart.com/gallery/52790653/Devious-Folder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RO_ Posted April 20, 2014 Author Share Posted April 20, 2014 I like the Carolina striping pattern a lot more than their currents. You've done a good job on all of these.Thanks!Maybe I missed a memo on this but is there a reason only the "A" in Panthers has the three pronged slash mark on the wordmark? Why not the other letters that have the single notch? Other than that the only thing that gets me is that the set looks kinda clunky with the striping. It doesn't give me the sleekness feeling I get when I think of a panther.I have no idea why they gave just the 'A' in Panthers the three notches, haha. Is it the notches that you think makes the striping clunky, or the shape of the stripe in general? Just curious.I like this look for Carolina, but I think you could've stretched the striping onto the collar area. Based off of what Oregon did with the new template, they used the feather pattern on the collar. I think this would look good if you extended the striping onto the collar.I thought about doing that but ended up keeping it what it is now. I'm going to try that and see how it looks.Love the concept, but I'm not liking the number fontI agree. Great uniform design, but the numbers are too round compared to the sharp angles and edges of the design.I was trying to find a font that sort of resembled the wordmark (though I can't really say it does a good job of doing that, either), but I do agree that it looks out of place. Gonna try some more angular fonts and post an update later this evening. Thanks for all the feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gator71 Posted April 20, 2014 Share Posted April 20, 2014 It is definitely the shape of the stripes that give me the "clunky" feeling. I like the slash marks a lot. Maybe a full colored yoke would look better. But I would suggest maybe a different approach all together given your previous use of yokes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tifq76 Posted April 21, 2014 Share Posted April 21, 2014 Love the concept, but I'm not liking the number fontI agree. Great uniform design, but the numbers are too round compared to the sharp angles and edges of the design.I agree. Sharpen em. other than that a great look! Panthers desperately need work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RO_ Posted April 23, 2014 Author Share Posted April 23, 2014 Here's a quick update to the Panthers with a new font:Home:Away:Alt:The rest can be found here: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RO_ Posted April 24, 2014 Author Share Posted April 24, 2014 While working on the Panthers concept I was hit with a lot of inspiration for a Falcons concept, so I knocked that out as well. They currently have one of my least favorite unis in the league, and it seems that their throwback is incredibly popular, so a Minnesota style update seemed appropriate.-Red helmet, black primary jersey. The red jersey is now the alt-The striping pattern was inspired by the striping on the throwback's socks, the stripes also feature little 'wings' like the font and wordmark.-Black and grey pants return Home: Away: Black pants: Grey pants: Red alt jersey: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted April 24, 2014 Share Posted April 24, 2014 Fantastic. Love that number font for the dirty birds. One thing that makes your concepts look kind of sloppy though, is that the numbers are under the seams on the front. It looks like crap honestly. If you put them over the seams, these would look a lot better than they already are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RO_ Posted April 24, 2014 Author Share Posted April 24, 2014 Never really noticed the seam thing before, but that's a simple rearrangement of layers. Thanks for the head's up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted April 24, 2014 Share Posted April 24, 2014 Atlanta's striping pattern is too generic for me, but those are exactly how I envisioned their number font when I did my concept for them recently. Great work on that! Applaud the presentation and work here -- just not a fan of the striping pattern, a little too boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SFGiants58 Posted April 24, 2014 Share Posted April 24, 2014 I love the fauxback look for the Falcons (esp. the sock stripes and the number font). I'm not a big fan of the black pants, but I am happy that you averted the leotard look with the red socks. Well done! MLB: Project 32 (Complete), MLB: The Defunct Saga (Complete) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eagle98 Posted April 24, 2014 Share Posted April 24, 2014 I agree that the sleeve stripe on the Falcons is a bit generic.The Panthers look good, though.Overall, this is one of the best NFL concept series I've ever seen. I kind of wish Nike would hire you to do the redesigns because on the whole these are better than most of the uniforms that Nike has been putting out. "Jesus said to him, 'I am the way, and the truth, and the life.'" - John 14:6"For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life." - John 3:16 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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