72freebie Posted May 27, 2014 Author Share Posted May 27, 2014 Memphis GrizzliesMiami HeatMilwuakee BucksMinnesota TimberwolvesNew Orleans Pelicans\New York Knicks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrWonka Posted May 27, 2014 Share Posted May 27, 2014 Well. I can honestly say you did a good job of being original...It's really late, so when I get up if I remember I'll try and do a full review to help out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted May 27, 2014 Share Posted May 27, 2014 Shoulder logos should face the sleeve for starters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrWonka Posted May 27, 2014 Share Posted May 27, 2014 You have very outside of the box designs. Nothing wrong, but some of these I think just look bad. Either with the colors you chose to use or the design in general.On all of them the shoulder logo is wrong. Think of the sleeve going down, they need to be rotated 90 degrees in both direction so that it's going down the sleeve rather than facing us.For the Knicks I think the home jersey looks nice, but the hem stripe is making an arch for what reason? I say leave it straight. Same goes for the alternate and away. On the away I'd take away the chest stripe. It's making the jersey seem bunched and you loose consistency. Sock stripes are very weird too. Just leave them straight.Pelicans are...eh. I think the arm design has potential but I think you're missing a lot by no hem design. I say try and incorporate the sleeve design to the hem and you could have a complete jersey. Yokes seem pretty small too, I'd widen them.I like the Timberwolves sleeve design, but I hate the underarm and side panel look. Take that right out. I'd incorporate the sleeve design to the hem and again, it could have a much better jersey. Also, I'm not a huge fan of the alternate logo.The Bucks are decent, only huge problem I see is the alternate. I think that's too roller hockey and not proffesional.The Heat are probably my favorite from the bunch besides the alternate. I think the gold prominent on it looks weird. I also think their actual primary would look much better. That runs into the problem of having a basketball on a hockey jersey but honestly ....I think when people do these series I think they should leave it as such. Like if the NBA did a summer hockey league we would know them as basketball teams playing hockey, and that's how I see it when people do these.Memphis is very bunched up, especially the away jersey. Connecting a colored yoke with a sleeve always seems to be wrong. Especially with different colors. I'd add TV numbers to every single one. Also adding a back to these.I think you could do much better with a better template too. I feel this template is limiting what you can do. Working with a better template I think can help enhance the look in general. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted May 27, 2014 Author Share Posted May 27, 2014 Thank you mr wonka I will take this all into consideration Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted May 27, 2014 Author Share Posted May 27, 2014 Could you also maybe reccomend a template Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadojoker Posted May 29, 2014 Share Posted May 29, 2014 Good job with these concepts. You can really run with them in terms of creativity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted June 12, 2014 Author Share Posted June 12, 2014 I am back after my computer crashing for a week so here are the Oklahoma CIty ThunderAnd a new Bucks 3'rd jersey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted June 12, 2014 Share Posted June 12, 2014 They could use some cleaning up, overall the designs are good though. Also you took the basketball outside of the other teams logos you should do the same for these Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted June 12, 2014 Author Share Posted June 12, 2014 Oh man how did I not see the ball in there, thanks I will get on fixing that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Falcoholik Posted June 12, 2014 Share Posted June 12, 2014 I would change the logo on the Hawks home and away. The hawk's talons look strange without the basketball there. Maybe just use the hawk head for all three.I agree. I'd use the PacMan logo for the alternate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted June 12, 2014 Author Share Posted June 12, 2014 a new thunder logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted June 14, 2014 Author Share Posted June 14, 2014 Orlando MagicPhiladelphia 76ersPortland Trail Blazers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted June 17, 2014 Author Share Posted June 17, 2014 Sacramento kingsSan Antonia SpursToronto RaptorsUtah Jazz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted June 17, 2014 Share Posted June 17, 2014 most of your logos are stretched vertically Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted June 17, 2014 Author Share Posted June 17, 2014 Here is the last of the bunch, the Washington WizardsNow that I have gotten through all the teams, I want to back and fix some of them up so I will still be posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted June 17, 2014 Author Share Posted June 17, 2014 What do you mean by stretching logos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted June 17, 2014 Share Posted June 17, 2014 They are stretched vertically Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted June 17, 2014 Author Share Posted June 17, 2014 So how can I fix that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JPDesign Posted June 17, 2014 Share Posted June 17, 2014 So how can I fix thatStop stretching them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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