alexo Posted May 27, 2014 Share Posted May 27, 2014 This one of my last concept. I would appreciate some C&C. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NCCoachArete Posted May 27, 2014 Share Posted May 27, 2014 Not a bad start, but with the bottom lip sticking out, he looks like he is pouting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadojoker Posted May 27, 2014 Share Posted May 27, 2014 Nice but I agree with coach on the lips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted May 28, 2014 Share Posted May 28, 2014 ^ yeah. otherwise great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexo Posted May 28, 2014 Author Share Posted May 28, 2014 Thanks for your comments! I will try to arrange the lips. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soarindude Posted May 28, 2014 Share Posted May 28, 2014 I'm surprised this didn't get any attention by a lot of people on these forums, but this is a fantastic concept. I could see this being used for the Braves as well, well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexo Posted May 28, 2014 Author Share Posted May 28, 2014 Thanks man! It's supposed to be a hockey team concept, but it could work on baseball. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted May 28, 2014 Share Posted May 28, 2014 Very nice modern looking design you have there! Aside from what others have already posted I think it needs a little something in the neck area maybe have some of his neck showing or part of a necklace. Other than that...I like this, Well done! https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redsoxboi18 Posted May 28, 2014 Share Posted May 28, 2014 Awesome concept. I agree with the bottom lip bit but otherwise a very well done concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexo Posted May 28, 2014 Author Share Posted May 28, 2014 Thanks! Like I said I'm working on the bottom lip now! And ren, that's a great idea, I'll try that too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexo Posted May 29, 2014 Author Share Posted May 29, 2014 Tried this for the lip, but it looks like something is missing : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hontas Posted May 29, 2014 Share Posted May 29, 2014 You still need to work on the mouth and lips. I think the mouth line is too long. Also, you need to create some kind of lips impression. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted May 29, 2014 Share Posted May 29, 2014 He looks like Bert from sesame street Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadojoker Posted May 29, 2014 Share Posted May 29, 2014 He looks like Bert from sesame streetWas thinking about the same thing. .lolHow bout slightly modifying it like FSU by having an open mouth or like the Blackhawks logo with closed mouth. Lips are key. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexo Posted May 30, 2014 Author Share Posted May 30, 2014 Is this better for the lips? Still feel like something's missing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRicSlick Posted May 30, 2014 Share Posted May 30, 2014 Why does it have to look like a Simpson's character? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DanOtis Posted May 30, 2014 Share Posted May 30, 2014 Is this better for the lips? Still feel like something's missing... Hi alexo.About the lip. I'd suggest to take your time watching at other side-face pictures to get used to the anatomy before you simplify. I attached some pictures that show better executed lips - when already simplified.To me - the head still looks kind of flat although you implemented highlights and shadowing. I'm missing more dark blue shadowing to suggest the cheek-bones as well as some wrinkles for a more experienced impression of the warrior. There you can also use different shades of yellow around it to get more depth.One thing that also might cause the plain look is the fact that the feathers are fixed at some point but there's no headband - so right now it looks like it's just stuck to the head. A headband could also cause some shadow and bring more depth that way.The ear could use some shadowing as well. And the feathers could be a bit bended to look more natural. So there are many little things that you can to work on to get it to the direction that you want it to be.All the best wishesDaniel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexo Posted May 31, 2014 Author Share Posted May 31, 2014 It's not finished, but here is a new version : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted May 31, 2014 Share Posted May 31, 2014 much better I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadojoker Posted May 31, 2014 Share Posted May 31, 2014 Great! You nailed it right there. That's the one! Now you have a foundation to build on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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