GeauxColonels Posted July 17, 2014 Share Posted July 17, 2014 Not bad, the concept itself could use a bit of refining like repositioning the Adidas logo on the shorts so that it's got some space between it and the lines. Is the back of the shorts white....or is that just an issue with the rendering? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 17, 2014 Share Posted July 17, 2014 I think using a light neutral colored background (white/gray) would help the designs stand out more. There is so much going on in the clash design background it draws your attention away from the actual concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted July 18, 2014 Author Share Posted July 18, 2014 Bayern Munchen home kitThe first trouble was to do something to show 24 Bundesliga championships. My new system uses a gold star for 10 championships plus regular stars for one.The current one looks pretty decent as shown belowMy problem with it is it misses the classic all red look. I also added the world champs patch. I honestly think this is one of my best soccer kit designs. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted July 19, 2014 Author Share Posted July 19, 2014 C&C needed MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sanic Posted July 19, 2014 Share Posted July 19, 2014 I see where you're going with this, but the white spot where the adidas logo is looks a bit too big. Try to line it up with the collar.(lolwut "white spot") Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted July 19, 2014 Author Share Posted July 19, 2014 I see where you're going with this, but the white spot where the adidas logo is looks a bit too big. Try to line it up with the collar.(lolwut "white spot")It was part of my template because thats how Adidas does it. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted July 19, 2014 Author Share Posted July 19, 2014 BAYERN MUNCHEN AWAYThe current one looks great, but it does not say "Bayern Munchen" to me.I wanted to do the classic striped shirt here for Bayern. Also, does anyone mind telling me why I'm not getting feedback? Is it my fault? I got much more when my designs were 50x worse. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted July 19, 2014 Share Posted July 19, 2014 You should continue the stripes to the back, and I dont really like that template with the triangle below the collar and logo below the collar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted July 19, 2014 Share Posted July 19, 2014 You aren't getting feedback because all of these seem to be lazy designs that seriously lack creativity. Both of your bayern kits are not nearly as good as their current kits and the bayer kits look like benefica for the home and Sunderland for the away kits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 19, 2014 Share Posted July 19, 2014 I think both kits are a downgrade from the current kits. The Adidas template you're using (i think Fulham uses it still), is not only 2 or 3 years old...its pretty ugly. I'd also suggest removing the outlining on the numbers and changing the red NOB to white (along with all red that touches blue) as it will bleed together and be really hard to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted July 20, 2014 Author Share Posted July 20, 2014 Bayern Munich Clash KitI am no fan of the current clash because black just doesn't say "Bayern Munich" to me. I went for a complete redo hereMy inspiration was this historical jersey from a champions league final.My design was like it, but simpler, more modern, and overall better looking then the old Champs league jersey MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted July 20, 2014 Share Posted July 20, 2014 Please get rid of those stripes that run down onto the shorts. They look awful IMO. Also, the adidas stripes on the shorts should match those on the shirt as far as color go. And lastly, the number on the shorts should NEVER go up near the waste line. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted July 20, 2014 Author Share Posted July 20, 2014 I have a update that fixes the shorts already since psds make it so easy to do MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted July 20, 2014 Share Posted July 20, 2014 Now change the number on the shorts to red to match the shirt and the big t in the shirt sponsor to red. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VictoriaGooner Posted July 20, 2014 Share Posted July 20, 2014 The Bayer Leverkusen kits are nice, really like the use of the sky/baby blue for them. Nice touch! As for the FC Bayern Munchen's kits: I only like the third kits ass they are a throw back to a very good Bayern kit. It was nicely brought together in the concept. I also like the use of that specific template with the third kit. But I would use the same template for all three kits IMO. THE SHORT FUSE | ARSEBLOG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted July 20, 2014 Author Share Posted July 20, 2014 minor bayern update MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 20, 2014 Share Posted July 20, 2014 I like the update! But I believe that the Adidas logo must be on one color and not too (actual rule from Adidas)... So how about moving the adidas logo and the CL patch? Also what are you exporting as? These files look pretty distorted. I'd suggest uploading to tumblr (I notice some guys did that in the World Cup Contest, helps keep details better). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted July 20, 2014 Author Share Posted July 20, 2014 I like the update! But I believe that the Adidas logo must be on one color and not too (actual rule from Adidas)... So how about moving the adidas logo and the CL patch? Also what are you exporting as? These files look pretty distorted. I'd suggest uploading to tumblr (I notice some guys did that in the World Cup Contest, helps keep details better).I tried and it did even worse MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted July 21, 2014 Author Share Posted July 21, 2014 Borussia Dortmund Home KitHere is the currentIMO this is a good looking kit, but it doesn't have a Dortmund feel.For mine I tried to incorporate 3 main thingsThe classic yellow shirtThe feel of a Puma kitSomething quite modernI saw this kit from 11/12 to use as inspirationand here is mine MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midway Posted July 21, 2014 Share Posted July 21, 2014 There's nothing wrong with elongating the numbers so that they don't appear to be squashed. The design is fine but it needs something a little more eye catching than a single gradient stripe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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