Sidney Posted July 28, 2014 Share Posted July 28, 2014 Hi guys, well now I am posting the whole project, feel free to give suggestions and feedback Enjoy. So what do you think?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperThin Posted July 28, 2014 Share Posted July 28, 2014 I like it a lot, the logo and uniforms look perfect, but I'm not really a fan of the gold and black. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TylerG Posted July 28, 2014 Share Posted July 28, 2014 The maple leaf in the collar is awesome. NHL Uniform Matchup Database --- TylerG's NHL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 28, 2014 Author Share Posted July 28, 2014 Paper Thin: Thank you,yes, it's pretty unusual TylerG: Thank you, mate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iamdaviinci Posted July 28, 2014 Share Posted July 28, 2014 I really like the logo - it's clean yet detailed and a nice modernization. The CN Tower and maple leaves are excellent Toronto-specific details as well. The maple leaf collars are awesome in theory, but I'd be skeptical about their comfort and functionality in action.I'm not a fan of the shade of gold - I've found it to be a difficult color to work with digitally, but I think a lighter shade would work much better. This reminds me of the Purdue Boilermakers' dark gold, but I would try Drake's OVO medium gold. Also, the claw marks through the maple leaf secondary logo seem like a bit too much - the claw marks on the side panels are great, but beyond that it approaches redundant. Finally, I'm curious how the 'TORONTO' font from the primary logo would look for the wordmarks and last names....the current font is just fine, but I like the simplicity of the 'TORONTO' font from the primary logo a lot.Very good start overall! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 28, 2014 Author Share Posted July 28, 2014 Hoopladawg87: Thank for your feedback, I didn't know about Drakes's OVO medium gold, but now I'll look for it to make the change, for the collar maybe I'll do the leaf a bit larger to not touch the troath. Soon I'll show you how the font look like in the wordmarks. Thank you for your feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted July 28, 2014 Share Posted July 28, 2014 One thing, the primary home uniforms in the NBA have to be white, per league rules.Plus it doesn't really work using the custom, unaltered font of a well known university. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 28, 2014 Author Share Posted July 28, 2014 McCall: You right I should add the white one, I was thinking of the lakers, I am planning to try something on the font. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thaipod Posted July 28, 2014 Share Posted July 28, 2014 One thing, the primary home uniforms in the NBA have to be white, per league rules.Plus it doesn't really work using the custom, unaltered font of a well known university.How can that be true when you have the Lakers? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCap Posted July 28, 2014 Share Posted July 28, 2014 One thing, the primary home uniforms in the NBA have to be white, per league rules.Plus it doesn't really work using the custom, unaltered font of a well known university.How can that be true when you have the Lakers?The Lakers were grandfathered in. They're the one NBA team allowed to wear gold as their primary home uniform. PotD 26/2/12 1/7/15 2020 BASS Spin the Wheel, Make the Deal Regular Season Champion 2021 BASS NFL Pick'em Regular Season Champion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 I think three shades of gold are too many. If your logo is reliant on a lighter and darker shades of a specific color, you may need to redraw it to eliminate one of those extra shades.The Maple Leaf is a nice touch, but that would give you a collar with jaggy points digging into one's sternum. Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PerCR Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 I'm a fan of everything except the color scheme.I think either blue and white as a nod to the Huskies or bringing back purple to their current color scheme would look fantastic with these, that way it still feels like them. But other than that, I like them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FALCON6 Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 The maple leaf in the collar is awesome.agreed and man, the colors go well with your design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbannon92 Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 The logos and presentation of them are great. I love the pose of the raptor in the primary, and the maple leaves and CN Tower are nice touches. I agree that the shades of gold could be reduced. Maybe go with the lighter gold as the one gold, and use white for the highlights.Regarding the jerseys, they could use some work. Take the font from the "Toronto" or "Raptors" wordmarks and use that for the wordmarks and numbers. I like the claw marks on the shorts, but not on the jerseys. It's a little overkill. While the collar leaf is a good idea in theory, it wouldn't prove very functional. Lastly, the shorts could use a logo, IMO. I'm not sure where, but I would try to work one in. Nike + CFL 2015 | 2015-16 NBA Concepts | Complete College Football Redesign Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadojoker Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 Love the uniforms but id recommend white outlines on the gold and black uniforms similar to the red alternate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officeglenn Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 Lots of great stuff here. Just a few things I want to comment on:• Primary logo: The problem I have is with the wordmark below the dinosaur. "TORONTO" is fighting "RAPTORS" for visual supremacy. I think "TORONTO" needs to be smaller. I realize that means the CN Tower in the O will be lost then, but I don't think it's necessary in this instance because there's already a CN Tower in behind the dinosaur.• Uniforms: Really like the collar, as others have said, but I also agree the leaf on its own won't work. It's not so much that it would be a jagged edge, but perhaps a flap of fabric that will get folded over and lost during game action. I think the solution is simple, though: All you need is a contrasting triangle of fabric behind the maple leaf. You won't lose the effect you're going for, and it would be more durable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 29, 2014 Author Share Posted July 29, 2014 First of all thank you for your feedbacks, I'll make some changes. See you soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1clkgtramg Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 not bad, completely different from most peoples approach to it. I don't mind the logo - its just the colours I hate - but I'm sure if it had the 1995 colours on it, it would be one of the best in the league. I aslo agree with the font issues, maybe have some claw related things since that's the route you are going, something just a little more original. I do like the 2 colour look though. US and World License Plate Redesign - Fixing the Elite Ice Hockey League - NHL to Soccer Crossover - European Hockey League Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 The maple leaf in the collar is awesome.The Maple Leaf is a nice touch, but that would give you a collar with jaggy points digging into one's sternum.• Uniforms: Really like the collar, as others have said, but I also agree the leaf on its own won't work. It's not so much that it would be a jagged edge, but perhaps a flap of fabric that will get folded over and lost during game action. I think the solution is simple, though: All you need is a contrasting triangle of fabric behind the maple leaf. You won't lose the effect you're going for, and it would be more durable.About the collar: I think it's great for a concept, and cool for show, but in real life, they may jab in to people and bother them, or flop over, become a distraction, get lost in the design.But the MSU font?? I'm not backing that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 29, 2014 Author Share Posted July 29, 2014 Jake: Don't worry I am working on the font. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.