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i'm working on a logo for one of the teams in my fantasy football league and this is the first draft of the bear...the owner would like it to look "older and more fierce" - i'm open to suggestions and comments as this is my first draft - i do have some ideas that i'll be incorporating (and will post when i get a chance to work on it)

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The face is small. Adult bears have larger more round faces. They eyes are where you lack ferocity.

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Getting there, I would go rounder though. Give the face some mass like a huge bear. Besides that it is getting pretty close. Work on the brow some more, and go with a darker green.

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Here's a few pointers:

1. Make the eyes more bold, thicken and darken

2. Make the nose more wrinkled - bears have very fierce faces when they are attacking.

3. Round the face more and remove the lines you used to make the head wider.

I think if you work on those three areas your bear will be awsome.

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My high school was the Bears. Here is their bear head logo. Hopefully it may help as a reference.

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"The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed."

Dr. Kelso: My son is a big baseball fan. Not so much playing it, but more the designing and sewing of uniforms.

Tyler: That's neat.

Dr. Kelso: No, it's not.

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Still getting there. Listen to what the others are saying about the rounded face, though. Look at how close your bear's eyes are to the ears then look at the Baylor bear above it. Look at the other examples, too. The relationship between eyes/nose/mouth is all fine. It's that the shape of the head on the sides isn't wide or "rounded" enough, especially from the eyes. Just needs a little more.

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