scar988 Posted May 26, 2007 Share Posted May 26, 2007 Alright guys, me and my buddy on another forum are working on this series. he is making the basic logo and does hte writing, I'm doing the jerseys... the stories are good and he is definitely the brains behind it but what are your thoughts on it. please read the story in order to get an idea of the type of league it is supposed to be...Episode 1.1 "Making The Jump" => http://www.footballsfuture.com/phpBB2/view...2429600#2429600Episode 1.2 "Never Again" => http://www.footballsfuture.com/phpBB2/view...2465051#2465051Episode 1.3 "The New Hero" => http://www.footballsfuture.com/phpBB2/view...2493667#2493667 Episode 1.4 "A Bumpy Ride" => http://www.footballsfuture.com/phpBB2/view...2519354#2519354Episode 1.5 "At The Helm": => http://www.footballsfuture.com/phpBB2/view...2578523#2578523Episode 1.6 "A New Jump": => http://www.footballsfuture.com/phpBB2/view...2608610#2608610Episode 1.7 "Passions": => http://www.footballsfuture.com/phpBB2/view...2637036#2637036Episode 1.8 "Leading the Way": => http://www.footballsfuture.com/phpBB2/view...asc&start=0LA Fame setI will update them as he gives me more of the original logosoh and the teams that will be coming:1) Los Angeles Famethis post2) Philadelphia Independencehttp://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?s=...st&p=7688013) Houston Copperheadshttp://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...9703&st=40#4) Milwaukee Easy Ridershttp://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...id=7663255) Ohio Rumblehttp://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...id=7639086) Miami Sawsharkshttp://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...id=7761857) Dallas Roughneckshttp://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...9703&st=40#8) Baltimore Marauders9) Detroit Trolls10) The Phoenixhttp://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...id=76387111) Chicago Mobhttp://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...id=76632512) Boston Blazehttp://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...9703&st=40#13) Seattle Shockhttp://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...id=77273014) New Orleans Gatorshttp://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...9703&st=40#15) Gotham Gloryhttp://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...id=766325 RIP #55 JUNIOR SEAUOwner of ScarDraft.comBleacher Report NFL Featured Columnist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted May 26, 2007 Share Posted May 26, 2007 Looks like the Starbury logo sideways | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scar988 Posted May 26, 2007 Author Share Posted May 26, 2007 wow... or it's an arrow head and a star in it... but seriously read the story... it's sick... RIP #55 JUNIOR SEAUOwner of ScarDraft.comBleacher Report NFL Featured Columnist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted May 26, 2007 Share Posted May 26, 2007 Who or what inspired Mitch Rosenberg to be the commish? He's one of the cardiologists at one of the hospitals where I work, and he's no Tags, I tell ya that... Interesting stuff. As far as the logo goes, Pontiac might ask the Fame to kindly cease and desist with that logo. If a security guard can bring down the Ravens' logo, certainly GM could get a team in a relatively minor league to change their logo. "Start spreading the news... They're leavin' today... Won't get to be a part of it... In old New York..."In order for the Mets' run of 12 losses in 17 games to mean something, the Phillies still had to win 13 of 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scar988 Posted May 26, 2007 Author Share Posted May 26, 2007 Who or what inspired Mitch Rosenberg to be the commish? He's one of the cardiologists at one of the hospitals where I work, and he's no Tags, I tell ya that... Interesting stuff. As far as the logo goes, Pontiac might ask the Fame to kindly cease and desist with that logo. If a security guard can bring down the Ravens' logo, certainly GM could get a team in a relatively minor league to change their logo.wow... never thought about that.. anyway.. .yeah.. it's kinda just supposed to be something simple... not like we were trying to make this minor league have a great logo and such... not like it is the XFL. RIP #55 JUNIOR SEAUOwner of ScarDraft.comBleacher Report NFL Featured Columnist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scar988 Posted June 3, 2007 Author Share Posted June 3, 2007 RIP #55 JUNIOR SEAUOwner of ScarDraft.comBleacher Report NFL Featured Columnist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 must like General Motors:) first the pontiac logo and now the old trans am/firebird logo ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel Michael Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 Very, very nice. I especially like the Phoenix one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pcgd Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 Minnesota Vikings? If it wasn't so pontiac it could really work for them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scar988 Posted June 4, 2007 Author Share Posted June 4, 2007 must like General Motors:) first the pontiac logo and now the old trans am/firebird logowow. this isn't about the logo's it's about the uniforms and how the concepts look as a whole. I honestly don't care if y'all think they look like something else. I am just trying to get the concepts down for the teams... RIP #55 JUNIOR SEAUOwner of ScarDraft.comBleacher Report NFL Featured Columnist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scar988 Posted June 4, 2007 Author Share Posted June 4, 2007 RIP #55 JUNIOR SEAUOwner of ScarDraft.comBleacher Report NFL Featured Columnist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scar988 Posted June 4, 2007 Author Share Posted June 4, 2007 RIP #55 JUNIOR SEAUOwner of ScarDraft.comBleacher Report NFL Featured Columnist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel Michael Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 What is that on the shoulders? Tire treads? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scar988 Posted June 5, 2007 Author Share Posted June 5, 2007 RIP #55 JUNIOR SEAUOwner of ScarDraft.comBleacher Report NFL Featured Columnist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coast2CoastAM2006 Posted June 6, 2007 Share Posted June 6, 2007 LA Famei like the overall concept, but the logo kinda reminds me of pontiac and star trek went behind the bush, made whoopie and 9 months later produced the said logo. I'd emphasize the Star and ditch the pontiac logo.also the 'LA FAME' on the jersey might be a bit hard to see from a distance. i'd axe that off the jersey. Phoenix The Phoenix?i'm assuming the team is based in phoenix. Just calling the team The Phoenix might confuse fans as to where the franchise is located. Maybe try Arizona Phoenix. The logo i like but the wordmark gets difficult to see from a distance so that probably isn't needed. i'd go with a more simplistic wordmark if you are going to use it on the jerseys.Ohio RumbleThis one i like. Distance viewing of the helmet might start to be an issue. The rumble starts to merge with the black. But does have a TCU horned frog feel to it. I'd get rid of the shoulder design. unless you are watching the uniforms up close, most people arent' going to know whats on the jersey. Gotham Gloryi like the gothic feel to it. I do feel the logo is a bit too detailed and made to be viewed up close and not at a distance. The word mark I love, the logo not so much. The logo itself is cool but you get the full effect upclose and not away. I'd go with a more less detailed logo. Milwaukee EasyridersI absolutely love this concept. if only you can make a team named the Ghost Riders. that would be super sweet. however, i don't like the Milwaukee on the pants. i'd go with stripes down the side. The bike logo is awsome and probably is your best concept yet. Spoilers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted June 6, 2007 Share Posted June 6, 2007 nice guys.some of the logos are a bit tough to read and perhaps need more time but there are some nice ideas there and i do admire a bloke with a project. will be interested to see how the rest turns out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mike2sana Posted June 6, 2007 Share Posted June 6, 2007 i like the team history part its cool how the pheonix "rose from the ashes" ATL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illwauk Posted June 7, 2007 Share Posted June 7, 2007 How can you have a Milwaukee team that references Harley-Davidson and not use black, orange and silver for the colors?The logo is ok, but it doesn't look good on the helmet. I'm not a fan of "Milwaukee" on the pants (although I suppose that could work in your story's continuity if it were smaller and not so prominent) and if you're gonna have red numbers on a blue jersey you need a THICK white outline.I do like the flames on the jersey, but they would look SO much better if they were orange on a black jersey. Maybe you could try using the flame logo on the helmet instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scar988 Posted June 7, 2007 Author Share Posted June 7, 2007 wow. I thought y'all were gonna roast me for the flames... and yeah, I agree on some of the logos. I didn't make the logos, just the wordmarks... I need to remake a lot of them... and the colors for all the teams weren't my idea at all. it was just what the logo he gave me had for the colors. RIP #55 JUNIOR SEAUOwner of ScarDraft.comBleacher Report NFL Featured Columnist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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