Generic Posted July 15, 2007 Share Posted July 15, 2007 This is a made up hockey team called the New York City Liberty and 1. Features My first logo ever made 2. Not to be confused with the WNBA team the New York Liberty and 3. This was all made in paint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korbyn Posted July 15, 2007 Share Posted July 15, 2007 Not liking this one, sorry.The design is very, well boring. The logo is similar to the Rangers Alt, the only difference is there are buildings in the back and it doesn't have NYR at the bottom of the logo. My suggestions are for to put another color on the jersey. I would like to see some red, but then it may look alot more like the rangers. You always get props for trying though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted July 15, 2007 Share Posted July 15, 2007 It looks very empty on the shoulders. Maybe try adding something there. Logo is pretty good...considering that part of it is from the rangers. But as Korbyn said...You always get props for trying though!"Cat Eyes" - Josh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generic Posted July 16, 2007 Author Share Posted July 16, 2007 Ive Updated and im happy with my work what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Am A Flaming Douche Bag Posted July 16, 2007 Share Posted July 16, 2007 Still too plain. Colouring the shoulders doesnt just fix a concept. Still needs a shoulder logo and the main logo is too small. Add a third colour as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baseballking99 Posted July 16, 2007 Share Posted July 16, 2007 This is a made up hockey team called the New York City Liberty and 1. Features My first logo ever made 2. Not to be confused with the WNBA team the New York Liberty and 3. This was all made in paint.its not your first logo eever made because you didn't make it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generic Posted July 16, 2007 Author Share Posted July 16, 2007 Well I know the city and Lady Liberty may be ripped off but you know ive seen many people do that to there own logos but for making it in paint people admitted its nice but not great and i know that but I want to keep the logo.Basic - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
udubs03 Posted July 16, 2007 Share Posted July 16, 2007 Add a third colour as well.If you added a third color, you could get the skyline to stand out more. Right now, they really get lost behind lady lib's head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted July 16, 2007 Share Posted July 16, 2007 making it in paint peopleDon't blame the program. As for the concept, it's not a concept because it shows a lack of creativity and you stole that logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MVP Posted July 16, 2007 Share Posted July 16, 2007 making it in paint peopleDon't blame the program. As for the concept, it's not a concept because it shows a lack of creativity and you stole that logo.You know very well someone will bring in the pot-kettle reference.Don't make it so easy for people to insult you.Even if it was done in paint, I don't see an ounce of your patented sloppiness in Basic's concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generic Posted July 16, 2007 Author Share Posted July 16, 2007 Il Remake the whole jersey and put in red il make it look good.Basic - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generic Posted July 16, 2007 Author Share Posted July 16, 2007 Well I Updated to what you guys were telling me1. Added Red as a Color to the Jersey (added 3rd color)2. An outline to divide to city from the Statue of Liberty3. Added a Shoulder PatchFacts1. This team would be like the AHL farm team for the NYR2. This is NOT a REAL team.3. I know the logos look alot like NYR but the "NY" is for both teamsSo please tell me what you think of this update and please comment on if you want to see something change.Basic - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted July 16, 2007 Share Posted July 16, 2007 Great update!! I like how you CAN take c&c and use it...therefore you are already better than patsox.Anyway...Perhaps try making the main logo bigger. "Cat Eyes" - Josh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted July 16, 2007 Share Posted July 16, 2007 Great update!! I like how you CAN take c&c and us it...therefore you are already better than patsox.Anyway...Perhaps try making the main logo bigger. "Cat Eyes" - JoshDoes it make you feel better about yourself when you say things like that you little ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted July 16, 2007 Share Posted July 16, 2007 Great update!! I like how you CAN take c&c and use it...therefore you are already better than patsox.Anyway...Perhaps try making the main logo bigger. "Cat Eyes" - JoshDoes it make you feel better about yourself when you say things like that you little ?Srry to tell you the truth bud...but its true. How many people agree? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blueziggy Posted July 16, 2007 Share Posted July 16, 2007 so the liberty is from the Rangers alt and the skyling from the Mets logo. why not just take the NY hockey stick from the Islanders and use that as the alt/shoulder patch logo? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generic Posted July 16, 2007 Author Share Posted July 16, 2007 i agree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted July 16, 2007 Share Posted July 16, 2007 I take it you agree with what I said cause I think blueziggy was not serious in saying that?"Cat Eyes" - Josh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsM29 Posted July 16, 2007 Share Posted July 16, 2007 I agree. By the way, I noticed that you made the head bigger inside the circle. I think this hides to much of the cityscape. I think you should shrink the head down again and make the whole circle bigger. (if that makes sense) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generic Posted July 16, 2007 Author Share Posted July 16, 2007 I want to keep the logo how it is cause I dont care much for the city in the background I care for the Statue and for the part the team is called Liberty.Basic - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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