chickenfish13 Posted March 31, 2009 Share Posted March 31, 2009 OK, this is a logo I am making, for the Hershey Bears. I am happy with the shading and outline, but I am having trouble with the facial area. I really need some c n c so I can develop this concept. Thanks a lot. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted March 31, 2009 Share Posted March 31, 2009 first thought @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted March 31, 2009 Author Share Posted March 31, 2009 I know it look like the Memphis Grizzlies, but I was trying to get it away from it. That's why I need help with the inside/face. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted March 31, 2009 Author Share Posted March 31, 2009 Update with a different mouth. I think it looks cartoony, and I couldn't fit a tongue in there. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted March 31, 2009 Share Posted March 31, 2009 The eyes are the big problem. They are too condensed compared to the rest of the face. Also the nose looks a little too round. The nose on your first post was closer to the real thing. Keep working on this CFish, it has potential. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted March 31, 2009 Author Share Posted March 31, 2009 Any other thoughts? dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyHubCaps Posted March 31, 2009 Share Posted March 31, 2009 The ears lack detail, and there is a lot of empty space; that's all I can really think to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted March 31, 2009 Author Share Posted March 31, 2009 Update dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wyopokes2 Posted March 31, 2009 Share Posted March 31, 2009 I think you should have some shading around the eyes where the snout merges with the eyes. I just feel something is missing around the eyes. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VC// Posted April 1, 2009 Share Posted April 1, 2009 Try finding the mask Bill Ranford wore during his 2nd time around with the Bruins. LETS GO PENGUINS! 5x Stanley Cup Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ohenry Posted April 1, 2009 Share Posted April 1, 2009 that bear has down syndrome... just delete it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted April 1, 2009 Author Share Posted April 1, 2009 After reading ohenry's amazing advice, it have me inspiration t update it. He may still look like he is a bear with down syndrome, but he is my bear with down syndrome. Thanks to elliott for the help. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted April 1, 2009 Share Posted April 1, 2009 After reading ohenry's amazing advice, it have me inspiration t update it. He may still look like he is a bear with down syndrome, but he is my bear with down syndrome. Thanks to elliott for the help.ITS MANBEARPIG. IM SUPER SERIAL GUYS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted April 2, 2009 Share Posted April 2, 2009 What font are you using for your titles? (Primary, Secondary, etc) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted April 2, 2009 Share Posted April 2, 2009 1. The "BEARS" wordmark has a black line between the red and the gold, but the bear head does not.2. The insides of the B and R look really odd. Need gold.3. Bear head needs black. 4. Bear needs blood dripping from his teeth, so it looks like he just tore up a moose... or a really bloody plant.5. Ignore 4. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted April 2, 2009 Author Share Posted April 2, 2009 College font, from Dafont. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted April 2, 2009 Share Posted April 2, 2009 College font, from Dafont. Where it says CSCreative? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted April 2, 2009 Author Share Posted April 2, 2009 Oh, sorry, that font is Oklahoma. I got it a dafont as well. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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