tj4eck Posted November 8, 2009 Share Posted November 8, 2009 It's been a long time since I have made a concept so I figured I'd try to shake of the rust by redesigning my favorite NFL team the Washington Redskins.1st off a ton of credit for the template from Brave-Bird 08.-My design is based off of the Throwbacks that the Redskins occasionally pull out.-I love the R in the circle/feather logo a lot and decided to use that as my helmet logo. (Just like the Redskins do with there throwback.)-The jersey are also derived from the throwbacks.-The pants were inspired by the helmet/socks Sean Taylor wore when he was still alive. (R.I.P.)Away / HomeVersion 1.1I know its a little bit un-clean but I got lazy C&C mucho appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted November 8, 2009 Share Posted November 8, 2009 interesting. love the jerseys on both, the pants...not so muchI found it funny you were inspired by Sean Taylors sock preference, which got him finedmaybe for a Broncos concept you could do striped swirls? again, tho, the jerseys rock! so does the helmet!I could send you that template in svg. if you have a compatible program u use...it would make the concept look cleaner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDixonDesign Posted November 8, 2009 Share Posted November 8, 2009 Wow, Sean Taylor went overboard, just look at his facemask! As for the concept, yeesh, those pants are bright, try some continuity (sp?) in the striping as well, play with a few versions of the striping, the pants pattern may look good on the helmet, vise versa as well... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LMU Posted November 8, 2009 Share Posted November 8, 2009 I agree about the yellow. It should probably be a lot more of a mustard shade. Right now, there's not really any consistency. You have different stripe patterns for the helmet, sleeves, and pants. If you're going to use that barberpole-style one, maybe try to incorporate it elsewhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tj4eck Posted November 9, 2009 Author Share Posted November 9, 2009 Thanks for the feedback so far.Does anybody else have some C&C before I retouch these? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tj4eck Posted November 10, 2009 Author Share Posted November 10, 2009 Still looking for more feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zmspartans Posted November 11, 2009 Share Posted November 11, 2009 interesting. love the jerseys on both, the pants...not so muchagain, tho, the jerseys rock! so does the helmet!i second these comments . nice work . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted November 12, 2009 Share Posted November 12, 2009 Excellent. Most Redskins concepts fail to improve because the current set is just so classic and leaves little room for improvement.Well done. The pants are a big risk, but knowing the reason for them (#21), I like them. I loved the 75th anniversary throwbacks and wished they had worn them more than once. The gold pants looked great, as did the helmet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tj4eck Posted November 13, 2009 Author Share Posted November 13, 2009 Which of these do you prefer?Pant Stripe matching the original Helmet stripeVersion 2.1orHelmet Stripe matching the original pant stripeVersion 2.2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KennyRock Posted November 13, 2009 Share Posted November 13, 2009 Version 2,1 is by far your best to this point. I might suggest that for consistency's sake, either add a yellow outline to the burgundy numbers on the road OR remove the outline from the white numbers on the home. I'd opt to remove the outline - the burgundy jersey has enough yellow to tie it together without that outline. New York Jets |3-3| First, AFC EastNew York Mets |74-88| Fourth, NL EastNew York Islanders|34-37-11| Fifth, Atlantic DivisionNew Orleans Hornets |21-45| Third, Southwest Division Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted November 16, 2009 Share Posted November 16, 2009 Version 1. Nice work. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KJTALBOT Posted November 18, 2009 Share Posted November 18, 2009 You removed the best parts of the uniform. The best logo in the NFL and their dark red helmets. Everyone loves a roundel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tj4eck Posted November 18, 2009 Author Share Posted November 18, 2009 You removed the best parts of the uniform. The best logo in the NFL and their dark red helmets.Although I like the red helmet...I absolutly perfer the throwback yellow helmet and absolutly perfer the "R" in head-dress logo over the "Redskin" indian logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted February 16, 2010 Share Posted February 16, 2010 You removed the best parts of the uniform. The best logo in the NFL and their dark red helmets.Agreed 100%. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted February 20, 2010 Share Posted February 20, 2010 For version 2.1 (for the sake of consistency) I would stripe the socks like the shoulders or just a single stripe like the pants/helmet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LetsGoOakland9 Posted July 2, 2010 Share Posted July 2, 2010 I like the orinial design the best. I do agree though that it needs continuity in the striping. I would take the stripes off the shoulders and put a TV number (which is required either on the sleeve or shoulder)and make yellow cuffs and collar. i would also take the yellow outline off the away numbers and make the script on the jersey white. For stripe continuity make the helmet stripe match the pattern on the pants. And dont the bottom of the socks have to be white in the NFL? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LetsGoOakland9 Posted July 2, 2010 Share Posted July 2, 2010 Ha i scrolled right past version 2.2. That one is definately the best but I would make the changes I said in my previous post. BTW this is one of the better designs I've seen on here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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