joshhockey

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  1. Well I hate to be that guy but there is a typo on your wordmark. As an LOTR fan though I'm loving this series!
  2. This is very clean and very well done. The "hidden I" is a nice touch. The only suggest is maybe to make the shading on the horns asymmetrical?
  3. Hey guys, I'm pretty proud of the logo set I created for my Diamon Dynasty team this year on the Show so I decided to share! Sorry for the lower quality, used my phone's camera...
  4. Watching this logo progress has been awesome, you've really done a good job listening to critiques and tweaking it into an impressive logo. However, just to add a couple suggestions, the forehead area looks very empty right now and could likely benefit from some shading like you've done on the nose. Also, I'm not sure if it would improve the logo, but the way the bottom jaw is right now actually curves upward whereas in the reference photo posted earlier you can see it would be the opposite. Those are just a couple small things that may or may not improve an already great logo!
  5. I'm not sure if you're still looking to clean up the logo a bit but the way the M and W come together is distracting with the uneven gap between them. Other than that, I really like the direction you took here.
  6. This is very well rendered and is a very good start, the only critique I have is that 90% of the logo is very sharp and angular and the big, round leg muscle ends up looking very out of place.
  7. Well I completed my second team Cordoba Atletica. I'm very proud of this crest and think its some of my best work so I'd love to hear what others have to say! I also redesigned the league logo for a second time because why not?
  8. I love the stripe on the shorts for the Galaxy, very clever use of the H. However that number font does not work at all IMO.
  9. It's a pretty good start you've got. I'm not a huge fan of the little white sections on the front of the jersey because they're really the only white on the uniform other than a small outline. Also your side and front view of the pants don't match up.
  10. Here's my first go at this project. This was really fun to make and I'm looking forward to my next team!
  11. The underline on the wordmarks for Arizona is such a clever touch that looks great. This is definitely one of my favourites from the series so far!
  12. This is an awesome idea. I'll hop in on it if you want to send a team my way!
  13. That alt is very nice. One suggestion is to maybe fill the A's on the home and road jerseys, they get a little lost.
  14. Does anybody have tbdaniel's Adidas NBA template in vector (.svg or .ai work) format? The links in his thread are broken. Thanks!
  15. This is a great idea and they look great. The Grizzlies one is perfect with that outline!
  16. Here is the second concept I've been working on. The team is called the Tucson Outlaws. The concept really started as the native looking pattern and went from there. I'm pretty proud of the jersey design as I think it is really original. C&C would be greatly appreciated. Primary: Secondary: Home: Away: Alternate:
  17. Yeah I see that now too, I had to decide whether to put the feather behind the C or in front and it looked best behind but it does become a little distorted looking due the the shape of the C. I'm especially proud of the eagle logo and just wanted to see if there was anything I could do to improve it as I'm trying to get away from inanimate object logos and force myself to create more animal, human and anatomical logos.
  18. Lately I haven't really been doing much of anything for real teams but instead getting my practice by creating random identities and trying to challenge myself to make logos in styles that I normally wouldn't. This has lead me to work on some 'fantasy' concepts. Anyways, I'd love some C&C because what I'm looking for with these concepts is just to become a better designer. Here is the first concept, the Jefferson City Eagles. Primary: Secondary: Home: Road: Alternate:
  19. The next concept in the series is the Bulls. Really just an update on the current set. The sublimation on the back is the flag of Chicago and the Chicago script returns to the roads. C&C please. Team 5 - Chicago Bulls Home: Away: Alternate:
  20. I am absolutely in love with that Magic set. Just beautiful.
  21. The link to the template is in mbannon92's sig. He replied to the thread further up this page. I just wanted to say thanks for the feedback to everyone, I love hearing what everyone has to say and seeing all the varying opinions. I've updated Charlotte with two options. One with straight scripts and numbers and the other with italicized scripts and numbers. Personally, I like the italicized as it ties in with the racing theme as the numbers on most, if not all, race cars are italicized. I thought about going to checkered side panels for the full time home and roads but I don't feel like it would be too similar to Brooklyn within a league setting. I think that opinion is coming out because I posted them back to back and they both have pinstriped panels. Anyways, C&C would be awesome as always. Home: Road: Alternate:
  22. The next team is the Charlotte Bobcats. There's not too much to explain, obviously slightly race inspired. C&C please! Team 4 - Charlotte Bobcats Home: Road: Alternate:
  23. Here's a quick Brooklyn update. Just a small change to the side panels and a new "Nets" version of the alternate to compare to the original. Home: Road: Alternate Comparison: