Captain Tsubasa

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  1. This joy juice always gives me the giggles: http://gourmetsupplies.com.sg/377-large_default/kickapoo-joy-juice-canned-drink.jpg http://cdn6.bigcommerce.com/s-muq4v/products/3565/images/3822/893A__35260.1437882769.386.513.jpg?c=2
  2. Looks nice, but I can only decipher the N. Where are the other letters?
  3. Is Adidas’ pre-match shirt design supposed to celebrate censorship in Russia?
  4. Huge upgrade! Looks great on the kits as well:
  5. For those who can read German, here's an interesting interview with Adidas' designers: http://m.11freunde.de/interview/wie-die-chefdesigner-von-adidas-das-dfb-trikot-entwarfen?kompletter-artikel
  6. The sponsor logo is barely readable on the golden kit. I'd either color the sponsor black and place the stripes on top and below, or just make the two stripes one big one.
  7. Really good basis you got there. The main thing that irks me is how the bat is pinned on to the basketball lines, like some butterfly in a museum. Give the poor thing more room to breathe! Maybe let the lines end with pointy tips or claws before they even touch the bat. As for colors - yeah, they're gaudy, but it works for this identity.
  8. If you want to add "APEX" on there, I would recommend to place it on the top, rather than into the green space.
  9. How about a Snowball World Series? Some team names that come to mind: Antarctica Emperors Greenland Ox Himalaya Yetis Iceland Vikings Mont Blanc Glaciers Northern Lights Siberian Tigers ... Sounds cool?
  10. Sorry to be that guy, but I think you piggyfied the nose of dog even more than on the original. So unless you want to make it a "Schweinehund", I'd refine that snout a bit more.
  11. I think it looks better in a shield and prefer option no. 3. However, I still find the strokes too heavy/thick. As for option no. 2, it gives me pencil tip vibes.
  12. The second version is the better one in regards to conveying both the A and the mountain. However, I agree that the weight of the strokes is too heavy. Also, once the steering wheel was mentioned, it's really hard to unsee. Maybe you can add a bit more mountain details to counter that, and/or make it a different shape than a circle. A shield might work well here.
  13. Certainly an upgrade. Really like the Dutch lion as well. However, seeing both logos together, it OCDs me that the hexagons are not exactly the same height.
  14. Really an incredibly well done series! Congrats and thanks, C²!
  15. Would've been more suitable for Tottenham Hotspurs
  16. Both of your renditions look good, but I also think the one with the white outline pops more. You should try it with different backgrounds as well though, to get a better feel for how it looks in different applications. Edit/ The comment was regarding your previous renderings. I did not open the last page of this thread.
  17. The designer who came up with this atrocity obviously found some shrooms during his inspirational trip through the Black Forest.
  18. Minor detail, but I really dig how smoothly UA's monogram is placed on that red stripe.
  19. Ouch, that hurts! Your design is so many lightyears above that garbage they went with.
  20. Looks cool, but can you simplify it more? At small sizes this would be too busy.
  21. Not bad GoRedSox! To improve it further I'd suggest to expand the galaxy a bit, so the letters don't stick out so awkwardly. Also, if the quasar could be placed in the center of the galaxy, it would make a bit more sense beyond just being there for "recognition value".
  22. Subtle, but good improvement, especially on the lozenges. Still hate the Bauern though!