Captain Tsubasa

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  1. On 9/28/2017 at 12:03 PM, jdp said:

    For #3, any thoughts on adding "ARSL or "APEX" in the green space?

    If you want to add "APEX" on there, I would recommend to place it on the top, rather than into the green space.


  2. The second version is the better one in regards to conveying both the A and the mountain. However, I agree that the weight of the strokes is too heavy. Also, once the steering wheel was mentioned, it's really hard to unsee. Maybe you can add a bit more mountain details to counter that, and/or make it a different shape than a circle. A shield might work well here.


  3. Both of your renditions look good, but I also think the one with the white outline pops more. You should try it with different backgrounds as well though, to get a better feel for how it looks in different applications.

     

    Edit/

    The comment was regarding your previous renderings. I did not open the last page of this thread. ^_^


  4. Not bad GoRedSox! :)

    To improve it further I'd suggest to expand the galaxy a bit, so the letters don't stick out so awkwardly. Also, if the quasar could be placed in the center of the galaxy, it would make a bit more sense beyond just being there for "recognition value".


  5. I'm not really convinced that a train that has left town is really the best moniker, but if you wanna go down that track I would definitely use it's beautiful maroon and gold color scheme. 

     

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    That being said, I would probably elaborate more what you could do with the Tigers identity. 


  6. On 5/31/2017 at 1:35 PM, TheLogoManiac13 said:

     

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    For this one, I decided to play with the idea of spelling out Hawaii with the lava instead of abruptly end it. I know it doesn't look good now so I just want to know if I should look into it digitally (and much cleaner) or do something different.

     

    I like the direction this one is taking! :)

     


  7. 7 hours ago, Gothamite said:

    Maybe it's not fair blame the Wilpons for this script specifically, since it predates their ownership of the team, but I'm pretty much down with blaming them for anything we can. :D

     

    +++Conspiracy Theory Alert+++

     

    Nobody is supposed to know this but... It's actually a very subtle NLP advertisement from Nike.  :o

     

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