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@NeauXoneThanks for the feedback! 
Here are the versions without the shadows. What you think? 

Hi, got no feed back so here is the white jersey 

As you guys know, I was working on my numbers font, so here is the font in action.

I had in mind the idea of the pirate ship. I've tried to implement movements in the font in order to get a dynamic result. This direction has been chosen because whenever the ship is attacking they're showing their colors/waving flag. 

Here is the final version! I think everything is better the motion, perspective and general feeling. 
I've done slight modifications :
- I've done the right ear shorter + no light on it so it's black...
-Played around with the right eye as well.

Ok, here is the update. 

-I've redrawn the jaw area

Ok, I'll redefine it. 

58 minutes ago, QCS said:

I think the neck should be shrunk a bit and I'd say to keep the whiskers as the same color on both sides (white).

Is it any better? 

I've anticipated a matchup between my concept logos

Hi, here is the vector version! I'm not sure about the whiskers of the right side which one works better? 

Thanks for your help! your point and explanations were really interesting

Again @QCS thanks you for helping me with this design  Here is an other update 

@QCS got back on the drawing board, is it any better ? when I was working on it I've understood what you was saying. 

Thanks for the feedback, I'll try few changement to bring that forward motion.

Here is the Carolina panthers logo vectorized, what you think? 

I'm not mad neither. I do understand what you say. Yours looks good too.  It's a popular brand and a lot of people tried  

And thanks again

11 minutes ago, mattharveysc said:

Your Raiders logo looks great. I won't lie.

Can I also ask, did you use mine as a reference? I see a lot of similarities? 

https://dribbble.com/shots/9711908-LAS-VEGAS-RAIDERS-Logo-Concept

@mattharveysc Hi thanks I appreciate. 

No I didn't, I usually check on the internet as much as possible when I start a project to see if my idea is already used/taken to avoid similarities. I feel like every Raiders concept are pretty close because we (ppl that made a project on this team) are not changing much etc. You feel like we got a lot of similitarities? for example here is what I've done as a sketch. 
Here is an other project for example that are similar to yours and I https://dribbble.com/shots/3989505-Oakland-Raiders-Shield

Here are my sketches if you watch closely my character has the head a bit low to look like a kick off/charge. 

I was working on my numbers font, I had in mind the idea of the pirate ship. I've tried to implement movements in the font in order to get a dynamic result. This direction has been chose because whenever the ship is attacking they're showing their colors/waving flag. C&C are apprciate to improve the font. 

Hi, I'm working on my LV Raiders presentation project and I thought about this new shield it's I think aesthetic and the logo has a better balance overall. 

You did a good job! now that I'm watching my first version I see every mistake lool. 

Back at it... now it's easier to modify, now that I got my stuffs back!

I'll correct/improve these parts and  once done, I'll see about the neck. 

- Improved both ears

- Changed both eyes & both whiskers

- Pushed the nose on the right
-Redrawn  & change the perspective of the mouth area

Hi @Htown1141

I understand every points you've said.  I can't see the image....I got my graphic tablet back so I'll be able to make all the improvements. Thanks for helping fixing his logo, it's going I believe in the right direction  

Here is an update
- A new look on the far ear 

- I've redrawn the teeth area with a better perspective
-I've improved the mouth area in order to correct the far side of the face
- I've made the neck thinner

Thanks for the critics, I'll try my best to improve everything that has been told. I was already redrawing the right ear because something was off to me, the fact that we've seen that make it an area to improve!. thanks!

I had to put the 2 options ^^wasn't really sure. So nothing in particular about the face? 

Hi guys,
 

I'm back with an other design, the Carolina panthers, I've done this from my phone so there are some adjustments I'll do when I'll be able to use my graphic board. What you guys think about the design? any improvement?