Bulldog22

12 minutes ago, Dan O'Mac said:

I think your strongest look is the pentagonal option at the bottom. I'd start be cleaning it up, as your lines are not smooth in places. Secondly, the spikes on the outside are a bit fuzzy, so I'd clean those up. Finally, I'm not a fan of the "ribbon" at the bottom for Stow Soccer. Something just seems off about that part.

Thanks for your advice! I've been having a lot of trouble with the spikes and with the ribbon would you say it's the font, the shape...

I've been tasked with creating a logo to be used for a spirit wear fundraiser for my high school soccer team and I'm hoping for some criticism of my drafts.  The logo is supposed to relate to the Bulldog logo I have included below.  Please tell me what I can improve!

Thanks so much @Captain Tsubasa!!!!! I will definitely take your advice into account while compiling my final drafts.

Hi everyone,

I'm currently a junior in high school and an aspiring graphic designer with a sports obsession.  I've been following the concepts on this site for years but never posted/created my own sports designs.  Recently I've created some rough concept jerseys for some youth premier soccer clubs in my area.  For the jerseys for some unexplainable reason I decided to work from a screen shot of a template that @raysox posted a while ago.  Also the brand I used for the jerseys is a small but growing company based in my area called Un1tus which has full-dye sublimation capabilities and is used my many clubs near me.  Truly my goal for these jerseys is to send them to the teams, and if they want to use my designs I will then include the jerseys in my portfolio when applying to college.  However before I sent them out I wanted some professional C&C. 

So lots of C&C please!!!

Second row is the best in my opinion.

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