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Spartan24898

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  1. This logo has a ton of potential, but it needs a little cleaning up. The shark has a hunchback look going, you need to try to make the shape of the back a little smoother. Not sure what kind of shark you were going for, but if it's a great white the fins need to be much thicker. If it's a mako, they only need to be thickened slightly. Either way, the dorsal fin is the only one thick enough, but it needs to be taller. The tail looks a little strange as well. Finally, the gills are a little too high up on the body. Look at reference photos to help. Once you fix this up though, it's really good looking. I love the color scheme, it's unique and really works well. Also a quick note, I had never heard of a clipsal before, so I looked it up and the only thing I could find was an Australian brand of electrical accessories, not sure if that's what you were going for or not with the team name.
  2. I agree that the logo does nothing to suggest the wizards name, but neither does their current primary so I don't think it's a big deal. That could be included in an alternate or something. Ad for the actual logo, it is gorgeous, no complaints. The time lapse was really cool as well.
  3. I think the smooth look still looks menacing enough, but it looks strange right now because the eye, mouth, and lower jaw are still boxy. If you really like the boxy look, you could go in the opposite direction and extend that to the neck instead of smoothing the head. I think I'd prefer the smooth look because, as JTswag187 said, the boxy look feels a little outdated, but I think either would be ok as long as it's consistent.
  4. I agree with ThePeam, tongue looks fine to me.
  5. I'm not really liking how the logo has both blocky and curved sections, they look really awkward next to each other to me. I think it would look better if you tried to stick to one or the other as much as possible, either go full out with the blocky look or get rid of it. A couple other minor things: the teeth should stretch farther back on the mouth and the left "eyebrow" looks a little off. It's a great start, I'd much rather see this than their boring new roundel.
  6. These are amazing! Well done. The only issue I have is that with the team initials, I can't help but see the St. Louis Cardinals cap logo, which the Angels might not like to see.
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