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  1. While I like the later Hawks uniforms with the seahawk head on the sleeves, the originals look gorgeous
  2. I would've gone with the green-silver AAFC/NFL (1950) Colts, but the 1953 unis are fine (though I did like the 1956 throwbacks with two horseshoes at the back of the helmet worn about 10 years ago)
  3. I like the Monarchs concept, and your other uniforms are looking better, but there's one more big thing you need to fix. https://photos.app.goo.gl/eEAUurVfAP5kyVr6A You can't have both numbers and a logo on the sleeve - either move the numbers to the shoulder or get rid of the logo
  4. Why do these jerseys have both shoulder and sleeve numbers? I'd pick one or the other. Also, vertically flip the left shoulder numbers
  5. Rams look fine, but I wish you'd kept the blue horns on the white jersey - the yellow horns on white don't stand out. When worn with yellow pants I think the look will still have a nice balance of color.
  6. I'm not the best at seeing colors, but what color are the Lions' numbers? From my screen they look like a light blue/teal, which is a curious look for a team that's used only Honolulu blue, silver, white, and black since 1949. Are you intending to have a double-blue? Also, why is there black on the pants but not on the helmet? For the throwback (which is a great look), I'd suggest taking the logos off the sleeves. The retro logo on the helmet is a nice touch. Remove the sock stripes, white collar, and black outlines on the pants to give it an old-time look. The point of the Lions' throwbacks is to simplify - blank helmet, jersey, pants, and socks, recalling the glory days of the 1950s. White numbers with no outline would also help. This is your concept, but I'd try to make the alternates more different from the home and away set, especially when using a retro look
  7. and from what I see, the Rams' jerseys still don't have correct TV numbers. Move one of the numbers to the jersey back, and see if you can angle them in line with the curve of the jersey, like in the Gridiron Uniform Database's graphic. Sorry if this is too much criticism, but I think making these fixes will really help in the overall appearance of your concepts.
  8. I just want to clarify: Is it your intent on the Rams jerseys for the horn on the sleeve to point both forwards and backwards? It's fine if you're aiming for a Patriots-like jersey, but if you're aiming for a horn I believe you should have the horn coming from the front and curving back around. In other words, it shouldn't be symmetrical on both the front and views. Look at the Rams' throwbacks right now - the horn starts as a shoulder stripe then finishes on the sleeve, curling forwards. I'm not saying you have to do it like this, but it would make the jerseys more visually appealing. One final critique - the white space on the away jersey for the Rams is awkward - try to have the yellow sleeve caps mesh with the blue horns. Starting the horn off as a shoulder stripe might fix this
  9. I'd add TV numbers to the shoulders of the Ravens - they look empty without
  10. Maybe try a different helmet logo, or change the helmet back to white Or you could play around with the shade of green. As @MCM0313 pointed out, it is pretty close to the real thing, and the point of a concept is to make modifications
  11. The Trojans-style jersey was a good idea. Overall, a large improvement over what you started from. The horns though look a bit off - one side of the jersey has the horn going forward, while the other side has the horn going backwards. If you can, try mirroring the right side of the front view of the jersey to the left Then, mirror the left side of the back view to the right.
  12. Better! A few more fixes I see could be made: It may be the template, but both the horns and the numbers can't both be in the sleeve cap area, so I'd move the numbers to the shoulders, if possible. I'd make the belt on the middle jersey navy or gold (white belts on non-white pants aren't a great look in my opinion) and on the alternate (navy on gold) fill in the white tops of the pants gold - all the pants options should be one color. Belts are okay to fill in as a different color, but filling in the tops of the pants makes the uniform look sloppy. It's your concept, so I don't want to post too much CC, but one last suggestion. On the 1949 alternate, I'd make it strictly red and yellow, and reserve grey for the facemask. Red jersey with yellow numbers, and yellow pants with no logo (the stripe is fine but make it red). The 1949 horns were an older, retro style, but the helmet you have is fine - just make the horns gold and it'll be good. Now, for what you did well: I love the 1960s throwback - great look, well done Changing the yellow pants' stripe to just blue made the look more consistent Hope this helps
  13. Why does the Chargers alternate have a white collar? Also, black, navy and light blue do not work well together without any gold to separate them. The tops of the pants shouldn't be white. These are easy things to fix. I really want these concepts to succeed, as I've followed this thread since the start, but apart from image quality there haven't been many improvements. Your Rams concept is on the right track, but there's what I would modify: 1. On the yellow jersey, make the belt on the pants navy. 2. With the white jersey, the white stripe on the yellow pants doesn't work. Make it fully navy, like in the other combos 3. Consider filling in the sleeve caps on the white jersey to yellow, to imitate the classic look of the Rams 4. Name should be navy on yellow and white jerseys, and yellow on a navy nameplate on the navy jersey. Right now it looks like a mess. 5. Why are you adding old gold to the navy and white Fearsome Foursome style jersey? I'd keep it just navy and white 6. Red numbers/name on an old gold jersey don't work - they aren't readable 7. Why are you adding old gold? The Rams have phased out Millennium Gold, and I doubt they'd add it to any jersey in the foreseeable future. I'd like to know why 8. I'd make the red alternate look like the 1949 Rams uniform for a throwback don't feel like you have to follow these suggestions, but I think they'll improve the concepts.
  14. I actually prefer the original, with the sword on both the jersey and pants.
  15. I'd also prefer orange sleeve caps on the white jersey, and save the 'white tiger' look for a color rush alternate