Here's the story on this logo below, I intern at Niagara and they asked me to design a logo for the golf tournament the athletic department runs as a fundraiser. I started this design using a different font, and have been trying to get to a final design. Then when I show the mock ups to the person running it, he wanted me to use the "athletic departments font" which you see below, italicized and all. I can't help but feel like the text is "off" but I'm restricted to this font. So any comments and constructive criticism would be very much appreciated, thank you.