seancarter Posted August 20, 2014 Share Posted August 20, 2014 like to see this concept in color but I understand that you can only do so much with concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted August 20, 2014 Share Posted August 20, 2014 Thought I'd try the bandana on the face. Also changed the hat a bit and added a shield similar to ERay's.I really like the concept of the logo, the one thing that irks me is the eyes. The brows/cracks (not sure) make him look more surprised than intimidating. I'm not sure the best way to fix that, but overall, the concept looks great. I can't wait to see a finished productI think one thing one thing that would help the eyes, which was stated earlier, is putting a patch over one eye. I also liked the sombrero rather than the cowboy hat. One more thing: I would put a "RAIDERS" script above the head in the shield. Just to keep some of the history alive. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForwardProgress Posted August 20, 2014 Share Posted August 20, 2014 One thing I just noticed: the eyes look too much like Skeletor from the 1980's Masters of the Universe cartoon in the second version of this logo. That isn't necessarily a bad thing though. Logos remind people of other things all the time. For example many people think the Patriots logo looks like Elvis and jokingly refer to it as "Flying Elvis". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted August 21, 2014 Author Share Posted August 21, 2014 So here is a version based on some of the suggestions. I will be creating a colored version, just not until I have the drawing right. It seems like I see Jalapeno on a Stick or a tornado/T shape. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted August 21, 2014 Author Share Posted August 21, 2014 Any thoughts on Patch and Sombrero? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eagle98 Posted August 21, 2014 Share Posted August 21, 2014 I like the patch (though it's not very pronounced in the sketch. I think once it's colorized it'll look better.)I don't particularly care for the pattern on the sombrero. My favorite of the three hats was the first one.I'm impressed by the overall quality of this concept. "Jesus said to him, 'I am the way, and the truth, and the life.'" - John 14:6"For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life." - John 3:16 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
j'villejags Posted August 21, 2014 Share Posted August 21, 2014 The pattern on the sombrero reminds me of a zipper but I like the overall shape of the hat. You might try putting the patch on the other eye to make it more distinguishable. The bandana and shield look great. I'm anxious to see this in color. I think it'd look sharp on a helmet. My NFL concept series (in progress) --ATL, CLE, NE, WAS done. AZ updated 04/21/23. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-ROY Posted August 22, 2014 Share Posted August 22, 2014 I know a lot of people may disagree, but I feel the first design was the best       Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted August 22, 2014 Author Share Posted August 22, 2014 Here they are all together so we can see what similarities there are. The most recent has the hat from the 1st and the face/bandana from the second. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgthree Posted August 22, 2014 Share Posted August 22, 2014 I like the patch and the removal of the hair from the most recent version, but i enjoy the hat from the second version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted August 22, 2014 Author Share Posted August 22, 2014 4 colored options:1 23 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrano123 Posted August 22, 2014 Share Posted August 22, 2014 #2 all. Day. Long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orange Crush Posted August 22, 2014 Share Posted August 22, 2014 Definitely #2. Have you thought about putting the silver outline on 3 & 4? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soarindude Posted August 22, 2014 Share Posted August 22, 2014 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted August 22, 2014 Share Posted August 22, 2014 That's a logo, for sure. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio  POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted August 22, 2014 Author Share Posted August 22, 2014 Really!? Just announced today too. Go figure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LoyolaProp1 Posted August 22, 2014 Share Posted August 22, 2014 #4. Really cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted August 22, 2014 Author Share Posted August 22, 2014 Here is the other version:1b 2b3b 4b Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted August 22, 2014 Share Posted August 22, 2014 #2, but with the football instead of the circle.Personally, I kinda liked the skull with the mustache and goatee. That's a skull with some personality! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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