Sharpir0 Posted October 2, 2014 Share Posted October 2, 2014 Hi all Been working on a patch illustration today whilst working on improving with the pen tool. Thought i'd post here for some feedback if possible.As always any critique and/or tips would be more than welcomed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted October 2, 2014 Share Posted October 2, 2014 for the most part this looks really good. the main complaint is that it has a live traced feel to it. you can kill that by eliminating some of the wonky highlights on the helmet and stripe specifically. if this were to be a patch, you want to cut some of the details in the face too as they will be very hard to embroider. simplicity is your friend GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sharpir0 Posted October 3, 2014 Author Share Posted October 3, 2014 Revised Good shout on the helmet Brandon. TBH the helmet and facemask were probably the most difficult parts to work with due to the specular highlights and the detail in the facemask. I thought overall it was a bit to detailed, but found it difficult to pinpoint exactly what needed altering. Thanks for your comments, really useful to get a second pair of eyes on it and look at from a fresh perspective. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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