Blackhawks#9 Posted October 6, 2014 Share Posted October 6, 2014 sorry about the crappy quality, not sure what is going on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted October 6, 2014 Share Posted October 6, 2014 don't post it if you don't like it take a little more time. I've done that many times too MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted October 6, 2014 Share Posted October 6, 2014 the bottom stripes need to be consistant other than that i love the color scheme. also not a fan of the phantom yoke. either have one or don't Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperThin Posted October 6, 2014 Share Posted October 6, 2014 I'd take a little more time, because it looks a little sloppy. However I do like the color scheme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officeglenn Posted October 6, 2014 Share Posted October 6, 2014 On the back, the numbers need to be smaller, and the nameplate has to be bigger.And yes, the striping should be consistent between the hems, the sleeves and the socks. It should also be consistent between the home and the away sets, but you can switch it up a little on the alternate.There's also not enough contrast between the shades of red and blue you've chosen. If you're going to stick with these particular shades, make sure to keep some white in between them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted October 6, 2014 Share Posted October 6, 2014 You saved it as a jpg file and that makes the quality worse. Start saving your concepts as a png file and it will be fine. I am sorry to say that you will have to do it again and save as a png to get what you want Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawks#9 Posted October 7, 2014 Author Share Posted October 7, 2014 tried to follow the c and c so here is the updated home uniform. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officeglenn Posted October 7, 2014 Share Posted October 7, 2014 Big improvement. Nice work! I would make the name on the back white, the number on the back blue with a white outline (like the sleeve number) and move the sock stripe down a bit β they typically go about mid-shin, so where it is now, it might actually be under the shorts somewhat β and I think you're golden for this set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawks#9 Posted October 7, 2014 Author Share Posted October 7, 2014 Tweaked it a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawks#9 Posted October 7, 2014 Author Share Posted October 7, 2014 here is the updated away uniform.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roadrunner8ball Posted October 7, 2014 Share Posted October 7, 2014 This is an overall nice set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawks#9 Posted October 9, 2014 Author Share Posted October 9, 2014 bump for c and c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimaPrime Posted October 9, 2014 Share Posted October 9, 2014 Now if only the NHL would consider relocating some of their failing "non-traditional market" teams so that these cool designs could see some light...*cough cough* Arizona Coyotes *cough cough* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officeglenn Posted October 9, 2014 Share Posted October 9, 2014 The white set feels a little too red-heavy. I'd change the thin outer stripes on the hem and sleeves to blue, as well as the outer outline on the numbers, just to balance it out a little more. Possibly even a thin white then a thin blue outline on the shoulder yoke too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted October 9, 2014 Share Posted October 9, 2014 Nice progress on this, Blackhawk.You've acted positively on the the advice given. Well done.Those are sharp looking unis.I agree with officeglenn on the adding of blue to the whites.Again, nicely done. *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawks#9 Posted October 9, 2014 Author Share Posted October 9, 2014 more blue added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawks#9 Posted October 10, 2014 Author Share Posted October 10, 2014 updated alt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officeglenn Posted October 10, 2014 Share Posted October 10, 2014 Very nice update to the white set.The alt looks great. I would just a thin white outline to the hem, sleeve and sock stripes to really set them off against the blue, like it does with the back numbers and the shoulder yoke. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted October 10, 2014 Share Posted October 10, 2014 Very nice. the changes you made really helped alot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawks#9 Posted October 10, 2014 Author Share Posted October 10, 2014 tweaked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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