sparkychewbarky Posted October 16, 2014 Share Posted October 16, 2014 Great thought about "flipping" the eye. Here is a revision set on red (sweater color):Well done h....Love it.That pike would destroy my hockey cod ! *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted October 16, 2014 Share Posted October 16, 2014 I think you nailed it with that last version. Great job! Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted October 16, 2014 Author Share Posted October 16, 2014 Added yellow as an accent color here and placed on jersey:And if you're not a fan of the yellow, this is what it would look like without: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted October 16, 2014 Share Posted October 16, 2014 I feel four colors is just way too much overkill. You also don't need the yellow/white outline around the fish. I think the navy outline by itself would suffice. I would also consider putting the double hook W's on the shoulders, or just one hook W. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted October 16, 2014 Share Posted October 16, 2014 Great thought about "flipping" the eye. Here is a revision set on red (sweater color):So cool!I agree that the yellow is cluttering it up. I think your arm stripes are a little weird, but it may look good IRL. I don't know a lot about hockey jerseys. laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted October 17, 2014 Share Posted October 17, 2014 The yellow isn't the problem, it's the two shades of green. Go with the lighter shade. I like the addition of red Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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kewp80 Posted October 17, 2014 Share Posted October 17, 2014 The yellow isn't the problem, it's the two shades of green. Go with the lighter shade. I like the addition of red Maybe fix the setting on your monitor cause I only see one shade of green.Your lines could use some smoothing up on your double W's logo, but other than that this is awesome! All of this coupled with the wordmark would make a fantastic minor league team or even could see it as a NHL team. Great work sir! Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted October 17, 2014 Author Share Posted October 17, 2014 One last thing, Captain and Alternate: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted October 17, 2014 Author Share Posted October 17, 2014 The yellow isn't the problem, it's the two shades of green. Go with the lighter shade. I like the addition of red Maybe fix the setting on your monitor cause I only see one shade of green.Your lines could use some smoothing up on your double W's logo, but other than that this is awesome! All of this coupled with the wordmark would make a fantastic minor league team or even could see it as a NHL team. Great work sir!Saskatoon Water Wolves? I am making the green lighter and red deeper, the color palette I was going off of was not right. The lighter green pops more and the red is moved into a more accentual role: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted October 20, 2014 Author Share Posted October 20, 2014 Here is the set:Primary:Secondary:Alternate:Home Jersey:Away:Can't decide between alternates: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted October 20, 2014 Share Posted October 20, 2014 i really like the logos but not a fan of the jerseys at all. The striping doesn't work for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted October 21, 2014 Author Share Posted October 21, 2014 i really like the logos but not a fan of the jerseys at all. The striping doesn't work for me.Home and away were fashioned after the Manitoba Moose jerseys, and the Alt after the Sabres anniversary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
capeaters Posted October 28, 2014 Share Posted October 28, 2014 Great work on the primary logo! I was not expecting a Pike when I clicked on this thread, I was expecting a wolf based on the name. Big fan of using research in designing sports logos "wolves of the water". Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted November 10, 2014 Author Share Posted November 10, 2014 Great work on the primary logo! I was not expecting a Pike when I clicked on this thread, I was expecting a wolf based on the name. Big fan of using research in designing sports logos "wolves of the water". Keep it up!Thanks for the comments. I'm big into research too, the name and imagery need to tie into the area. (otherwise you end up with things like the LA Lakers and Utah Jazz!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted November 10, 2014 Share Posted November 10, 2014 I prefer the red jersey by a country mile. Your logo contrasted perfectly with that bright red, which was also a really attractive shade. Now you have a primarily green logo on a primarily green background and the details get lost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted November 14, 2014 Author Share Posted November 14, 2014 I may have found a better use for this image. The northern pike is the state fish of North Dakota so....The UND Fighting Pike: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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hettinger_rl Posted November 17, 2014 Author Share Posted November 17, 2014 Seem to be many versions of UND kelly green, but I narrowed it a bit. Jerseys just to further visualize the idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PackerFan98 Posted November 17, 2014 Share Posted November 17, 2014 That would be a pretty cool mascot for UND. Great logo too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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