sparky 1,451 Posted October 16, 2014 Great thought about "flipping" the eye. Here is a revision set on red (sweater color):Well done h....Love it.That pike would destroy my hockey cod ! 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kewp80 64 Posted October 16, 2014 I think you nailed it with that last version. Great job! 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hettinger_rl 1,413 Posted October 16, 2014 Added yellow as an accent color here and placed on jersey:And if you're not a fan of the yellow, this is what it would look like without: 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kewp80 64 Posted October 16, 2014 I feel four colors is just way too much overkill. You also don't need the yellow/white outline around the fish. I think the navy outline by itself would suffice. I would also consider putting the double hook W's on the shoulders, or just one hook W. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
suplauren 97 Posted October 16, 2014 Great thought about "flipping" the eye. Here is a revision set on red (sweater color):So cool!I agree that the yellow is cluttering it up. I think your arm stripes are a little weird, but it may look good IRL. I don't know a lot about hockey jerseys. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Morgan33 4,028 Posted October 17, 2014 The yellow isn't the problem, it's the two shades of green. Go with the lighter shade. I like the addition of red 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kewp80 64 Posted October 17, 2014 The yellow isn't the problem, it's the two shades of green. Go with the lighter shade. I like the addition of red Maybe fix the setting on your monitor cause I only see one shade of green.Your lines could use some smoothing up on your double W's logo, but other than that this is awesome! All of this coupled with the wordmark would make a fantastic minor league team or even could see it as a NHL team. Great work sir! 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hettinger_rl 1,413 Posted October 17, 2014 One last thing, Captain and Alternate: 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hettinger_rl 1,413 Posted October 17, 2014 The yellow isn't the problem, it's the two shades of green. Go with the lighter shade. I like the addition of red Maybe fix the setting on your monitor cause I only see one shade of green.Your lines could use some smoothing up on your double W's logo, but other than that this is awesome! All of this coupled with the wordmark would make a fantastic minor league team or even could see it as a NHL team. Great work sir!Saskatoon Water Wolves? I am making the green lighter and red deeper, the color palette I was going off of was not right. The lighter green pops more and the red is moved into a more accentual role: 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hettinger_rl 1,413 Posted October 20, 2014 Here is the set:Primary:Secondary:Alternate:Home Jersey:Away:Can't decide between alternates: 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CreamSoda 2,073 Posted October 20, 2014 i really like the logos but not a fan of the jerseys at all. The striping doesn't work for me. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hettinger_rl 1,413 Posted October 21, 2014 i really like the logos but not a fan of the jerseys at all. The striping doesn't work for me.Home and away were fashioned after the Manitoba Moose jerseys, and the Alt after the Sabres anniversary. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
capeaters 0 Posted October 28, 2014 Great work on the primary logo! I was not expecting a Pike when I clicked on this thread, I was expecting a wolf based on the name. Big fan of using research in designing sports logos "wolves of the water". Keep it up! 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hettinger_rl 1,413 Posted November 10, 2014 Great work on the primary logo! I was not expecting a Pike when I clicked on this thread, I was expecting a wolf based on the name. Big fan of using research in designing sports logos "wolves of the water". Keep it up!Thanks for the comments. I'm big into research too, the name and imagery need to tie into the area. (otherwise you end up with things like the LA Lakers and Utah Jazz!) 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Morgan33 4,028 Posted November 10, 2014 I prefer the red jersey by a country mile. Your logo contrasted perfectly with that bright red, which was also a really attractive shade. Now you have a primarily green logo on a primarily green background and the details get lost. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hettinger_rl 1,413 Posted November 14, 2014 I may have found a better use for this image. The northern pike is the state fish of North Dakota so....The UND Fighting Pike: 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hettinger_rl 1,413 Posted November 17, 2014 Seem to be many versions of UND kelly green, but I narrowed it a bit. Jerseys just to further visualize the idea. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PackerFan98 91 Posted November 17, 2014 That would be a pretty cool mascot for UND. Great logo too. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites