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Another one that I've started months ago but haven't finished. I would really like some feed back as this one assome potential.

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I like the depth you added to the wordmark. What inspired you to use a shield?

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And I went with the claw because I feel people over time won't consider it cartoony and too Jurassic Park like. As much as I love their logo, I went with the claw.

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As a fellow Wildcat fan…. BEARDOWN, But I do really like this and feel it is an upgrade from their previous logo

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I like your logo.

But what I don't like is the fact that there is a thick white outline around the shield, but the word mark "Toronto Raptors" got a black one. Looks like the shield and the word mark don't really belong together.

That's why I would decrease the thickness of the white outline around the shield and put another white outline around the word mark (while keeping the black outline) of the exact same thickness – but only for the letters "R", part of the "A", part of the second "R" and the last letter "S", so the rest of the white outline is covered by the shield.

This should improve the overall look of the logo.

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Looks very nice. The shield you made is definitely an improvement over the circle.

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I like the rigid lettering you made. It matches the rough looking ball and claw. I agree with Go Red Sox that you need to add a white ouline around the R and S in Raptors to act as a border, especially if this were placed on a black background. The bottom of the Toronto lettering appears to have a slight arch. I'd make it straight across. There's a lot of empty black space in the shield. I'd consider making the claw more prominent and the shield smaller slightly. Overall this is nice and clean.

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I like the rigid lettering you made. It matches the rough looking ball and claw. I agree with Go Red Sox that you need to add a white ouline around the R and S in Raptors to act as a border, especially if this were placed on a black background. The bottom of the Toronto lettering appears to have a slight arch. I'd make it straight across. There's a lot of empty black space in the shield. I'd consider making the claw more prominent and the shield smaller slightly. Overall this is nice and clean.

Can't believe I didn't see that!

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