JH360 Posted December 8, 2014 Share Posted December 8, 2014 Would it be better then if the beak was closed?This is really weird. But that makes it kind of interesting. I think you could lose the claw all together and still get exactly what you were going for.I'm gonna try some stuff with the claw under the wing and see if there is a way to get my three goals across. So first I'm gonna work on composition and then start tweaking the claw and colors.On the update, the claw looks more like another smaller head than a claw. I think if you drop the claw all together and somehow refine the bird head it would look pretty cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dayne Amaze Posted December 9, 2014 Share Posted December 9, 2014 Yes! Exactly what I knew it would end up as! Huge improvement man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted December 9, 2014 Share Posted December 9, 2014 Really good update here! Although I do agree with some of the comments about the claw being a bit off. I would either refine the claw so that it is at a different angle or rework it so that it does not get mistaken as a second head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigmike Posted December 9, 2014 Share Posted December 9, 2014 Really glad you stick with the original logo and updated it. I really think you are onto something here. I love the Falcons current logo so IMO it is hard to top that but I like what you are doing with incorporating the A.As far as critiquing goes, I do think you could lose the claw but if you did that it would get rid of the hidden 'F' in the logo which I like, but I do agree with one of the other comments that it looks too much like the head. I feel like the head might need a little bit more detail? I know that would be hard to do with the simple look behind the logo but I feel like it needs to be defined a little more so the beak can stick out on its own. I also feel like the tail or bottom of the logo needs to be a little bit longer. Great update though, really look forward to seeing some more, and once you get the logo down I'd like to see uniforms with it! Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Check out my new NFL 2016 Series! Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoleYourRole Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 The idea is cool, but the leg gets me. Anatomically it just looks so off, being parallel to the body with the same general shape as the head and beak. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SplashBoogie Posted December 27, 2014 Author Share Posted December 27, 2014 I am sorry for my absence, school finals and exams got in the way but I think I've refined the logo and script to something a little more desirable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SplashBoogie Posted December 27, 2014 Author Share Posted December 27, 2014 Here's a first pass at a possible alt logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
worcat Posted December 27, 2014 Share Posted December 27, 2014 you had a good idea but i dislike the last two concepts. The idea of the beak and claw makes a "F" shape is lost with you making the claw tilted. Bleeding Blue since 1986 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted December 27, 2014 Share Posted December 27, 2014 I'm gonna try some stuff with the claw under the wing That was my biggest issue with the original concept--the claw going over the wing.So under is better--this is clearer, but I agree with those who say to make the claw smaller & angle it down--and I don't have a problem with those who suggest to lose the claw as well.Over all I liked seeing the progress--the older logo was not that good, but had a good idea behind it.You have improved in your execution--so that is a good thing. And you're willing to listen to advice--which is cool. Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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