jaha32 Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 I have to be honest that I actually think the updates are a bit of a downgrade. That probably isn't what you wanted to hear after putting time and extra effort to update this, but if you are still open to suggestions, the main issue in the update in my opinion is still the way the shark and triangle interact. First, the shark's dark body gets lost on the dark triangle, and a teal triangle would solve that. Another thing, in your initial draft, although the dorsal fin didn't stick out of the triangle and the tail fin got lost, the core of the sharks body (head, gills, dorsal and pectoral fins) occupied the center of the logo. I liked that. Now the shark seems to be slid to occupy the top left and the triangle fills the bottom right and they don't seem to belong together anymore. I think if you had just shrunk the triangle in the first draft, it would have been a better solution to fix that back tail issue. Having the tail fin disappear or partially disappear wasn't a bad idea necessarily, it was just the way the tail fin disappeared that was confusing. That's a lot of feedback, but I think this has a lot of potential still. I like your presentation too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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