Go Red Sox! Posted January 22, 2015 Author Share Posted January 22, 2015 Thanks for your comments, guys!Some like the new draft more than my original one and others would prefer my first version. I will work on an update of my first draft, putting various suggestions into practice. Then we got at least three different drafts to eventually find out which one's the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Go Red Sox! Posted January 22, 2015 Author Share Posted January 22, 2015 I still think your first primary was the best. It was definitely the most balanced, even if the tail could use a little work.I've never been a fan of the Sharks logo, i've always felt it was a big missed opportunity given the possibilities with the imagery of a Shark, but these are absolutely phenomenal and an enormous upgrade.The only NHL logo concept i've seen on these boards that competes with this is Sparky Chewbarky's Calgary Flames redesign.http://boards.sportslogos.net/topic/97076-re-designed-calgary-flames-flaming-c-logo-fixedI've actually never seen Sparky's Flames logo concept before. Well, what can I say? That's typically Sparky – whatever he designs, it's something to feast our eyes on. That's some top notch work again. In my view, it's perfect. Jack Hahn, Ren69, Brandon Moore and Sparky Chewbarky are my favorite designers of this forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan24898 Posted January 22, 2015 Share Posted January 22, 2015 I agree that I liked the flow of your original concept much better. Out of the latest versions, option B is my favorite. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Go Red Sox! Posted January 22, 2015 Author Share Posted January 22, 2015 As promised, here's my latest draft of the Sharks primary logo that includes the shark swimming around the triangle, like in my first version. The triangle has been downscaled, the white outline is now a lot thicker, adding more contrast to the shark in the foreground.The recently added fourth color, teal, is discarded because there is no need to highlight the shark anymore. The word mark is also edited, as SparkyChewbarky suggested. There is now enough space between the "S" and the "H".All the logos have updated colors.So, what's your favorite draft: A, B, C or the latest, D?Comments are welcome as usual. Thanks!Version D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan24898 Posted January 22, 2015 Share Posted January 22, 2015 I absolutely love the straight shark from A-C, I just don't think it works well with the triangle. It might just be me, but the curved shark looks a tiny bit elongated, as if the section between the pectoral fins and the tail would be slightly too long if it was straightened. I think C is my favorite, but D is very close.Interesting side note, to me the thicker white border on D makes the aqua color look a tad bit greener than it does in the other options. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Go Red Sox! Posted January 22, 2015 Author Share Posted January 22, 2015 I absolutely love the straight shark from A-C, I just don't think it works well with the triangle. It might just be me, but the curved shark looks a tiny bit elongated, as if the section between the pectoral fins and the tail would be slightly too long if it was straightened. I think C is my favorite, but D is very close.Interesting side note, to me the thicker white border on D makes the aqua color look a tad bit greener than it does in the other options.Draft D is using a different, more greenish aqua. I just didn't edit aqua in the other versions A-C. It's hard to get the entire tail part done 100% realistically without being forced to show the tail fin in a rather sharp angle that might actually be too sharp, ending up distorting the look of the fin too much. Anyway, I try to find a solution for that. Maybe shortening thattail a little might help without causing bigger issues. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted January 22, 2015 Share Posted January 22, 2015 They all look good...I'd have to say that both B and C look better than A.The shark emerging from behind the triangle really gives the logo some depth. Nicely done.I can eliminate A.Initially, I preferred the curved shark, but the straight one's growing on me, especially after you placed it from within the triangle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Go Red Sox! Posted January 22, 2015 Author Share Posted January 22, 2015 They all look good...I'd have to say that both B and C look better than A.The shark emerging from behind the triangle really gives the logo some depth. Nicely done.I can eliminate A.Initially, I preferred the curved shark, but the straight one's growing on me, especially after you placed it from within the triangle.Thanks, Sparky! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted January 22, 2015 Share Posted January 22, 2015 I still think your first primary was the best. It was definitely the most balanced, even if the tail could use a little work.I've never been a fan of the Sharks logo, i've always felt it was a big missed opportunity given the possibilities with the imagery of a Shark, but these are absolutely phenomenal and an enormous upgrade.The only NHL logo concept i've seen on these boards that competes with this is Sparky Chewbarky's Calgary Flames redesign.http://boards.sportslogos.net/topic/97076-re-designed-calgary-flames-flaming-c-logo-fixedI've actually never seen Sparky's Flames logo concept before. Well, what can I say? That's typically Sparky – whatever he designs, it's something to feast our eyes on. That's some top notch work again. In my view, it's perfect. Jack Hahn, Ren69, Brandon Moore and Sparky Chewbarky are my favorite designers of this forum.Windell918 and Raysox deserve to be up there.I like the first one. Not A or B or C or D, but actually the first attempt. The 2nd was a bit of an upgrade, but I still think that the first is the best Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted January 22, 2015 Share Posted January 22, 2015 C is perfect, though they all look good on their own right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted January 23, 2015 Share Posted January 23, 2015 I'd like to see what C looks like where we don't see the tail extruding. Where the triangle is just a black void that the shark is emerging from, rather than a triangle hoop it's swimming through. That's the only thing I don't like about this is that tail sticking out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biscuit faces of them Posted January 23, 2015 Share Posted January 23, 2015 I like a b c and d Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Go Red Sox! Posted January 23, 2015 Author Share Posted January 23, 2015 Thanks for all your comments, guys! @darkpiranha: Here is the shark without the tail part. I guess it'd work if the shark emerging from the triangle was depicted in a different angle, like in the original Sharks logo the team's using. I just think the logo looks too unbalanced now. Something's missing, literally. And I can't move the shark farther to the right due to his right pectoral fin eventually colliding with the white border of the triangle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MEANS Posted January 23, 2015 Share Posted January 23, 2015 Some good work, thanks for sharing.A,B,C, and E are less dynamic to me with the shark being straight, the top fin creates a bad tangent when the mark becomes smaller.The flow of mark D is where I see this mark being most successful but the back area still needs some work, I'd like to see the thickness of the white triangle somewhere in between this weight and the others. I think your first mark had the nicest flow to it but just needed some tweaks as far and the top fin tangent issue. I also don't think you need the SJ inside like in that original mark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan24898 Posted January 23, 2015 Share Posted January 23, 2015 Like I said before, I really like the shark coming out of the triangle in E. Maybe if the shark is tilted slightly down it would add a little more flow (and also another slight connection to their current logo. I see what you mean about it being unbalanced, not really sure how to fix that, but I hope there is a way to fix it because I really like that version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Go Red Sox! Posted January 23, 2015 Author Share Posted January 23, 2015 Some good work, thanks for sharing.A,B,C, and E are less dynamic to me with the shark being straight, the top fin creates a bad tangent when the mark becomes smaller.The flow of mark D is where I see this mark being most successful but the back area still needs some work, I'd like to see the thickness of the white triangle somewhere in between this weight and the others. I think your first mark had the nicest flow to it but just needed some tweaks as far and the top fin tangent issue. I also don't think you need the SJ inside like in that original mark.Thanks! Good eye!I will shorten the tail part of the shark (Draft D), so that part will be more visible and less bended. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Go Red Sox! Posted January 23, 2015 Author Share Posted January 23, 2015 Like I said before, I really like the shark coming out of the triangle in E. Maybe if the shark is tilted slightly down it would add a little more flow (and also another slight connection to their current logo. I see what you mean about it being unbalanced, not really sure how to fix that, but I hope there is a way to fix it because I really like that version.Well, I could only fix it by creating a different shark, but I won't start again from scratch. I will try editing Draft D, shortening the tail part. This should work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Go Red Sox! Posted January 24, 2015 Author Share Posted January 24, 2015 Here now is the latest version of Draft D. The tail part of the shark is now shorter, the tail fin is adapted to the new angle. I'm happy with the result and therefore Draft D is my San Jose Sharks primary logo. The other shark (A-C) might become a secondary logo sooner or later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrWonka Posted January 24, 2015 Share Posted January 24, 2015 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted January 24, 2015 Share Posted January 24, 2015 I feel like the original curved shark flowed much better than the newer versions. The straight is OK but the newer curved shark looks choppy to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.