PackerFan98 Posted March 5, 2015 Share Posted March 5, 2015 The gold in the mouth looks weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperThin Posted March 5, 2015 Share Posted March 5, 2015 The entire mouth looks pretty awkward. The tooth is too big, as well as the mouth. Also that gold thing is weird and shouldn't be there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted March 5, 2015 Author Share Posted March 5, 2015 The gold thing is its tongue. I'm still having trouble with the colors though. The gold is supposed to be tan, I'm not sure why my colors are off. Here's the uniforms, which still need a secondary logo.If someone knows how I can fix my color problem, it would be much appreciated. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted March 5, 2015 Author Share Posted March 5, 2015 The entire mouth looks pretty awkward. The tooth is too big, as well as the mouth. Also that gold thing is weird and shouldn't be there.I'm confused, it's a saber-tooth cat. The tooth and mouth are supposed to be big. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
9JakePenny Posted March 5, 2015 Share Posted March 5, 2015 Cool! I really like all the flags you made! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan24898 Posted March 5, 2015 Share Posted March 5, 2015 I disagree with PaperThin, I think the tooth should be bigger, at least from a realistic standpoint, if you look at a picture of a Saber toothed cat skull the teeth are quite large. I think what's making the mouth awkward to me is the straight line on the back of the tooth, again, look at a reference picture, the teeth should be curved a lot more. It also looks a little surprised right now, I think you should try to make the eye look more angry. Finally, I think you should play around with thicker and thinner sections of the outside black border to add more depth. Star championship signature credit to packerfan21396 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperThin Posted March 5, 2015 Share Posted March 5, 2015 The entire mouth looks pretty awkward. The tooth is too big, as well as the mouth. Also that gold thing is weird and shouldn't be there.I'm confused, it's a saber-tooth cat. The tooth and mouth are supposed to be big. Oops, my bad. I meant the tooth is too awkward. The shape of it is kinda weird. The tooth on the sabre tooth tiger slants backward a little bit, while yours doesn't slant a whole lot. Like this: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CanucksBrad Posted March 6, 2015 Share Posted March 6, 2015 Too much gold, not enough contrast with the white. Really needs some black in between them to make it pop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted March 6, 2015 Author Share Posted March 6, 2015 Too much gold, not enough contrast with the white. Really needs some black in between them to make it pop.As I said before, I'm having trouble with the colors. On my computer it's tan but you all are seeing gold. If anyone can help me fix that it would be much appreciated. I'm also going to try to work on the tooth and the eye. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CanucksBrad Posted March 6, 2015 Share Posted March 6, 2015 Too much gold, not enough contrast with the white. Really needs some black in between them to make it pop.As I said before, I'm having trouble with the colors. On my computer it's tan but you all are seeing gold. If anyone can help me fix that it would be much appreciated. I'm also going to try to work on the tooth and the eye.It's kind of tan-y gold. But I feel my point stand regardless. A light colour and white with no black/dark colour and it doesn't look right. There is black in the logo, seems like their should be black on the jerseys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted March 6, 2015 Author Share Posted March 6, 2015 Still trying to figure out the color situation, but here's an update for the logo. I fixed the tooth and tried a different eye. I also cleaned up the mouth a bit. I like it a lot better now. Thoughts? GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted March 6, 2015 Author Share Posted March 6, 2015 So I've got my laptop hooked up to my TV and I think I've got the colors fixed. I also removed black for a brownish color. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted March 6, 2015 Author Share Posted March 6, 2015 Updated jerseys. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted March 6, 2015 Author Share Posted March 6, 2015 Bum, bah, bum, bum, BUMP! GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperThin Posted March 6, 2015 Share Posted March 6, 2015 I feel like one light color and white just isn't doing it. I'd add another color to the mix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted March 7, 2015 Author Share Posted March 7, 2015 Added some black, I think this is it this time! GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CanucksBrad Posted March 7, 2015 Share Posted March 7, 2015 Added some black, I think this is it this time!This is exactly what I've been saying. Much better now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted March 7, 2015 Author Share Posted March 7, 2015 I feel good about the Sabercats now, even though they still need a secondary logo. I don't have any ideas for one yet, so I'm going to keep moving. Here is the crest logo for Grand Rapids. Introducing the Grand Rapids Mammoths! GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted March 7, 2015 Share Posted March 7, 2015 What is this ? Ice age? I really like these. What is the reasoning behind the names? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted March 7, 2015 Author Share Posted March 7, 2015 What is this ? Ice age? I really like these. What is the reasoning behind the names?Haha. I have all the names picked out already, and these are the only two prehistoric names. I just asked my friend what team he wanted me to do next and he picked the Mammoths. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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