JMurr

State Basketball Logo C&C

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Which is better with or without the palm tree. Also and C&C to improve is much appreciated.

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I like the second option bt if you found a way to make the Palm Tree seem less clustered it might work!

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It's better without the palm tree; that just clutters things up. But there are other problems.

The script font you chose for "alifornia" is too thin and wispy both to stand out against the ball in the background and to really go with the big, thick "C" font. And it may just be because of the C, but the basketball looks like it's misshapen, a bit oval.

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Now that you say that I think that the oval effect is because I have the sun bursts around the ball coming in to tight near the C.

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