dsaline97 Posted February 26, 2015 Author Share Posted February 26, 2015 I think it's be a LOT better if you fixed the canine. The inner part of the tooth needs to be concave, instead of convex. like this: That's the cheek you're referencing there, not the tooth. Does that need more definition? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted February 26, 2015 Author Share Posted February 26, 2015 Off page one already? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted February 27, 2015 Author Share Posted February 27, 2015 Suplauren, I took a look at some reference pics and it appears you're correct. Here's an update for that:Thanks to those of you who have helped with this project! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted February 28, 2015 Share Posted February 28, 2015 Suplauren, I took a look at some reference pics and it appears you're correct. Here's an update for that:Thanks to those of you who have helped with this project!Way way better! Awesome progress on this. laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted February 28, 2015 Share Posted February 28, 2015 I think that the cheek line could eb cleaned up, and teh front tooth could be a bit bigger. It reads as fur instead of a tooth to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted February 28, 2015 Author Share Posted February 28, 2015 I think that the cheek line could eb cleaned up, and teh front tooth could be a bit bigger. It reads as fur instead of a tooth to me.You're talking about the lower jaw, correct? Yeah, I can certainly clean up some of these lines today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted March 1, 2015 Author Share Posted March 1, 2015 I'd like to say this is the final update, but I've gotta be open for any changes I might need to make.Yes, I realize the lettering on black isn't consistent, but that only happens on the alternate "Pride" jerseys I gave the basketball teams. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted March 1, 2015 Share Posted March 1, 2015 The L looks like a skinny Libscomb Bisons logo http://www.sportslogos.net/logos/view/72944222014/Lipscomb_Bisons/2014/Primary_Logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted March 1, 2015 Share Posted March 1, 2015 this is great it really progressed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted March 1, 2015 Share Posted March 1, 2015 The L looks like a skinny Libscomb Bisons logo http://www.sportslogos.net/logos/view/72944222014/Lipscomb_Bisons/2014/Primary_LogoBecause they're both the letter L? They're really not similar.As for the logo, the problem I'm having with it is that it looks flat. I think that has to do with two things. First is that your outline is very rounded, but your shadows and details are all jaged lines. Also, none of the details break the outline. I think if you made the whiskers actually stick out from the face it would add life to the logo and improve it ten fold. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted March 1, 2015 Share Posted March 1, 2015 No, because they both have the little jabby thing in the same place, and they look like the same font. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted March 1, 2015 Author Share Posted March 1, 2015 No, because they both have the little jabby thing in the same place, and they look like the same font.Nope, not even close. It comes from te Bulls (or Clippers) nob. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted March 2, 2015 Share Posted March 2, 2015 No, because they both have the little jabby thing in the same place, and they look like the same font.Nope, not even close. It comes from te Bulls (or Clippers) nob.I fail. Either way, I really like it. I like that you used a tall, skinny font for a very large wordmark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted March 3, 2015 Author Share Posted March 3, 2015 The L looks like a skinny Libscomb Bisons logo http://www.sportslogos.net/logos/view/72944222014/Lipscomb_Bisons/2014/Primary_LogoBecause they're both the letter L? They're really not similar.As for the logo, the problem I'm having with it is that it looks flat. I think that has to do with two things. First is that your outline is very rounded, but your shadows and details are all jaged lines. Also, none of the details break the outline. I think if you made the whiskers actually stick out from the face it would add life to the logo and improve it ten fold.Which outline are you talking about, the black/purple or the silver? I would like the whiskers to stick out, but with a side view its a little more difficult. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted March 4, 2015 Author Share Posted March 4, 2015 I've tried to make it a little more "3D" by playing around the ear and jaw. I don't really think there's a way to extend the whiskers off the page given the angle of the logo. C&C appreciated, I think this may be it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan24898 Posted March 4, 2015 Share Posted March 4, 2015 Have you ever considered putting the logo and the L together similar to Lehigh university? Could look nice. Star championship signature credit to packerfan21396 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted March 4, 2015 Author Share Posted March 4, 2015 Have you ever considered putting the logo and the L together similar to Lehigh university? Could look nice.I've worked on it some. Our track logo has that same concept, although I think that logo is stolen or just clip art. I'll try and upload a picture tonight of that. When I tried it it just appeared too busy to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_nxche Posted March 4, 2015 Share Posted March 4, 2015 Try rotating the logo about 20 degrees, I think it will add the finishing touch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted March 5, 2015 Author Share Posted March 5, 2015 Try rotating the logo about 20 degrees, I think it will add the finishing touch.Yeah, I tried that (both directions) and it made it a lot worse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted March 10, 2015 Author Share Posted March 10, 2015 I've tried to make it a little more "3D" by playing around the ear and jaw. I don't really think there's a way to extend the whiskers off the page given the angle of the logo. C&C appreciated, I think this may be it.Bump, any last thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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