bbb Posted March 5, 2015 Author Share Posted March 5, 2015 The pant stripe needs work--currently it is a major downgrade from what they currently have--but other than that, this is a good looking set.Maybe with their current stripes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted March 5, 2015 Author Share Posted March 5, 2015 First look at the Sharks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kansas sports fan Posted March 5, 2015 Share Posted March 5, 2015 Really like the Charger's new uniforms especially the blue helmet and yellow pants. I think the pants look better now. I also really like the colors you chose to use for them. Good Job. Acts 16:31 - And they replied: "Believe on the Lord Jesus Christ and you will be saved, you and your household."John 3:16 - "For God so loved the world that He gave His only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in Him shall not perish, but have everlasting life."John 14:6 - Jesus said to him, "I am the way, and the truth, and the life. No one comes to the Father, except through me." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted March 6, 2015 Author Share Posted March 6, 2015 Sharks v2 (C&C please) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan O'Mac Posted March 6, 2015 Share Posted March 6, 2015 I feel that the color scheme is too similar to the San Jose Sharks. I know each of the 8 Hawaiian islands have a representitive color (as found here: http://www.statesymbolsusa.org/Hawaii/Island_colors.html), so based on that, maybe using one of those to differentiate them from San Jose, yet tying them to Hawaii more. I like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted March 6, 2015 Share Posted March 6, 2015 Your line weight on the outside white is too thin you need to thicken those up also around the teeth needs to be thicker at smaller sizes it will all be lost... My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted March 6, 2015 Share Posted March 6, 2015 First look at the SharksA little too cartoony for the NFL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted March 6, 2015 Share Posted March 6, 2015 Yea, that mouth really hurts the design. I think that being fixed will help more than anything. "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted March 6, 2015 Share Posted March 6, 2015 He looks so cartoony, but I have a small feeling that that is clipart. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted March 6, 2015 Author Share Posted March 6, 2015 He looks so cartoony, but I have a small feeling that that is clipart. Do you want my SVG file?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted March 6, 2015 Share Posted March 6, 2015 No, I am just saying that it looks like clipart, and seeing as how you stole a logo off of deviantart, I assumed (incorrectly) that this was clipart.I apologize   Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted March 6, 2015 Author Share Posted March 6, 2015 V3New colors: the orange of Lana'i and the yellow of O'ahuThe image that l used to create the logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperThin Posted March 6, 2015 Share Posted March 6, 2015 The logo is awfully bland, and the outline is very thin. I'd add more detail, get rid of his since it makes it look very cartoony, change his mouth, and thicken the outline. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kansas sports fan Posted March 7, 2015 Share Posted March 7, 2015 I like the new colors for the sharks, but I agree that you need to make the mouth look like it has more teeth than it currently does and make the outline thicker on the bottom of the logo. Acts 16:31 - And they replied: "Believe on the Lord Jesus Christ and you will be saved, you and your household."John 3:16 - "For God so loved the world that He gave His only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in Him shall not perish, but have everlasting life."John 14:6 - Jesus said to him, "I am the way, and the truth, and the life. No one comes to the Father, except through me." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted March 7, 2015 Share Posted March 7, 2015 put some shading into it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted March 7, 2015 Author Share Posted March 7, 2015 New mouthThicker outline Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kansas sports fan Posted March 7, 2015 Share Posted March 7, 2015 It looks better, but something still isn't quite right. I think what is throwing me off is the color in between the two jaws. Nice improvement. Acts 16:31 - And they replied: "Believe on the Lord Jesus Christ and you will be saved, you and your household."John 3:16 - "For God so loved the world that He gave His only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in Him shall not perish, but have everlasting life."John 14:6 - Jesus said to him, "I am the way, and the truth, and the life. No one comes to the Father, except through me." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted March 7, 2015 Author Share Posted March 7, 2015 It looks better, but something still isn't quite right. I think what is throwing me off is the color in between the two jaws. Nice improvement.Thanks the color that l tried to use is the grey of kaho'olawe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted March 9, 2015 Author Share Posted March 9, 2015 Sharks alt logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan O'Mac Posted March 9, 2015 Share Posted March 9, 2015 I think the Alt logo is much better. I'd keep the waves enclosed in the circle, personally. I feel like something's not quite right about the wordmark on there though... I just can't put my finger on what that is. I like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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