soflo_sports Posted March 7, 2015 Share Posted March 7, 2015 I apologize if this isn't clean looking, it's my first time scanning a hand-drawn design into photoshop, but I hope you can give me constructive criticism based off the actualdesign. But without further adieu, here is the MLS by soflo_sports, including 4 new expansion teams, Atlanta United, Carolina City, Inter Miami, and Minnesota SC. Team 1: Atlanta Unitedhttps://docs.google.com/drawings/d/10_7lwGGMUWCoy6PNMsS2fdcZgRrgMVDiecOSDTP2av0/edit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soflo_sports Posted March 7, 2015 Author Share Posted March 7, 2015 I apologize if you couldn't access this before, It should be fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted March 7, 2015 Share Posted March 7, 2015 Can you post the images? Here, I'll help you do it in 10 seconds.1. postimage.org2. upload the pic3. copy the "direct link"4. paste it into the image tab on the forum MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soflo_sports Posted March 7, 2015 Author Share Posted March 7, 2015 Thanks bro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soflo_sports Posted March 7, 2015 Author Share Posted March 7, 2015 Sorry for the delay, here's Atlanta United Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerrylawless3 Posted March 7, 2015 Share Posted March 7, 2015 Use something other than a colored background. Makes it very hard to see the red uni. I also recommend using a template. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted March 7, 2015 Share Posted March 7, 2015 what software are you using? use the many recourses on the boards to help yourself out. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soflo_sports Posted March 7, 2015 Author Share Posted March 7, 2015 Ok so I used a template from nas1787, and I have the home uniform ready and it is looks a lot better. Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soflo_sports Posted March 7, 2015 Author Share Posted March 7, 2015 Here's Atlanta's away kit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted March 7, 2015 Share Posted March 7, 2015 On the away, I would give the numbers a different color routline than a darker red. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soflo_sports Posted March 7, 2015 Author Share Posted March 7, 2015 here's the new and improved aways Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted March 7, 2015 Share Posted March 7, 2015 better already, and I am glad you are willing to improve your work it will really get you places. I have a few things regarding the design here.Home kit:sash should be thinnermove sponsor logo up a tadmove crest upmake NOB red, it would not read well on a sunny pitchmake number outline thinnerAway:move sponsor logo up a bit to the center of that hoopmove crest and swoosh upthinner number outlinea few extrasthe MLS no longer puts the flag on the sleeveMLS has a specific number font that you can get herehttps://fontsbyconrad.wordpress.com/2014/02/19/mls-2013-font/if you use the font, do not use outlines MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soflo_sports Posted March 7, 2015 Author Share Posted March 7, 2015 I've changed a few things like the number outline color and size on the home and the sponsor placement and swoosh and crest placement on the away, but I have decided to keep the flag and designated number font on their (I feel it makes it different from what the MLS currently uses). So here is the final update of Atlanta, and I'll post Carolina City shortly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soflo_sports Posted March 7, 2015 Author Share Posted March 7, 2015 Carolina City HomeCarolina City Away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted March 7, 2015 Share Posted March 7, 2015 this one is looking decent, the crest is just a bit big. Fix that and your doing a lot better. I think a little detail in the home kit would do well maybe some sublimation. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soflo_sports Posted March 8, 2015 Author Share Posted March 8, 2015 Here's the renovated home with a smaller crest and some extra detail as requested by jaker52 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted March 8, 2015 Share Posted March 8, 2015 MUCH better. looks quite nice. Now if you want to keep moving forward in the future now look to do more unique designs on the shirts that are there for a reason. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soflo_sports Posted March 8, 2015 Author Share Posted March 8, 2015 Chicago Fire HomeChicago Fire AwayChicago Fire Third Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted March 8, 2015 Share Posted March 8, 2015 Nice, but it would be cool to incorporate the 6pt star in something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soflo_sports Posted March 8, 2015 Author Share Posted March 8, 2015 Jake3.roo, did you see that i put them above the name on the back? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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