Vicious Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 Hey Guys, Been toying with this logo for a few days. looking for some insight from another pair of eyes. Let me know what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trouble Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 looks like a bear with a mane. The eyes are OK, but something about the mouth/nose just doesn't look lion to me. Other than that, I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 You've got a great start here. Two things I would change. Lions' manes extend further above their head, like in this pictureExtending the mane further up, and removing the two highlights coming from the jaw will help to take away the bear vibe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted April 10, 2015 Author Share Posted April 10, 2015 Thanks guys. Here was the concept 1 round of revisions ago. http://rs74.pbsrc.com/albums/i258/dcards51/Mobile%20Uploads/Screenshot_2015-04-09-14-08-40-1_zpsehmwtb7e.png~320x480I wanted to integrate the head and the mane more to make it look less like they were two Seperate elements.I've also been stuck on the tufts of hair on the head mimicking a crown, but I suppose it's time to ditch that idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WavePunter Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 I think the original was better.. I actually like the highlights/shadows on the jaw and cheeks but maybe the rounder outer part of the jaw/cheeks should be shaped more like the shadows to give a narrower face appearance.. Also, making the ears slightly more triangular may help since bears have round fuzzy ears.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 the face is still a little to rounded and the mane could extend up more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 This is a fantastic start, I thought this one looks less bearlike than the original one. You could still pull off the crown thing and extend the mane. I'm really looking forward with what you come up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted April 10, 2015 Author Share Posted April 10, 2015 Thanks guys. I'll update this weekend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JB83 Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 Not really a fan of the heart shaped nose. Lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crabcake Posted April 10, 2015 Share Posted April 10, 2015 looks like a bear with a mane.Great. Now I'll never be able to unsee that.In all seriousness, this is pretty good, I actually prefer the one you posted here, but I do agree with the other comments about the mane being above the head and fixing the heart-shaped nose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thecargeek Posted April 11, 2015 Share Posted April 11, 2015 My first impression on this was it looks great. But by looking at it more, I can see how some people see a Bear face, which now is also stuck in my head. I find more of an issue in the nose colour than the shape itself. You have an all round two tone colour scheme with the golden yellow and royal purple, do added a lighter purple just doesn't seem right to me. Maybe remove that, and replace it with shadowing. It would also be nice to see the mane symmetrical, but I like your idea too.And correct as many have said, extend the mane further over the head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drakexedge Posted April 14, 2015 Share Posted April 14, 2015 I honestly dig it as is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted April 14, 2015 Author Share Posted April 14, 2015 Hey, sorry for the delay. I think i made pretty positive tweaks to the face and nose. Definitely less "bear-ish".Still trying to get the eyes and the mane right. Let me know what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted April 14, 2015 Share Posted April 14, 2015 I think this is pretty solid. Good work on updating it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted April 15, 2015 Author Share Posted April 15, 2015 some more tweaks. added a symmetrical mane.Comments and critiques welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JESSEDIEBOLT Posted April 15, 2015 Share Posted April 15, 2015 I think a symmetrical mane can work but the way it looks above doesn't look natural enough to be fur. It's too structured. Feels mechanical to me as is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted April 15, 2015 Author Share Posted April 15, 2015 I agree. I've got to make the mane more flowing, and less structured. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted April 15, 2015 Share Posted April 15, 2015 Yeah I agree. The symmetrical mane looks forced, and anatomically incorrect. the other one IMO looks better and I like a more flowing, more mane-y mane. (tell me if I make no sense, I'm sick today) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crabcake Posted April 15, 2015 Share Posted April 15, 2015 Hey, sorry for the delay. I think i made pretty positive tweaks to the face and nose. Definitely less "bear-ish".Still trying to get the eyes and the mane right. Let me know what you think. Can this be the lion that Orlando city uses? Please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted April 15, 2015 Share Posted April 15, 2015 Hey, sorry for the delay. I think i made pretty positive tweaks to the face and nose. Definitely less "bear-ish".Still trying to get the eyes and the mane right. Let me know what you think. Can this be the lion that Orlando city uses? Please?I second that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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