SiLeNt WaVe Posted June 2, 2015 Share Posted June 2, 2015 Been toying around with this idea a bit and am looking for some c&c. I feel the overall shape is fine, but the shading inside is a bit tricky with these birds. Am I on the right path here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted June 2, 2015 Share Posted June 2, 2015 Move the beak a bit closer in...it's a great start though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eagle98 Posted June 2, 2015 Share Posted June 2, 2015 It's a good start, but right now it just looks like a generic raptor rather than an osprey. As timberwolf said, the beak should be moved in closer to the eye. Also, I think that the beak needs to be a little more hooked.Take a look at some good reference photos to get the exact shape of an osprey's head.As far as the shading goes, the osprey has a unique striping pattern on its head. There should be a thicker, more consistent stripe running from the back of the head to the eye and beak. "Jesus said to him, 'I am the way, and the truth, and the life.'" - John 14:6"For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life." - John 3:16 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SiLeNt WaVe Posted June 3, 2015 Author Share Posted June 3, 2015 Just for context this is the image I'm using as the reference.But I feel this may be a better option. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted June 3, 2015 Share Posted June 3, 2015 The second one looks better. The little mohawk-like tuft of hair on the top will be a big difference from other birds of prey and the osprey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SiLeNt WaVe Posted June 3, 2015 Author Share Posted June 3, 2015 Did this quick and I think it's getting somewhere now.Shading still needs work but it's a start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SiLeNt WaVe Posted June 3, 2015 Author Share Posted June 3, 2015 Tried another shading version. Right or left? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgthree Posted June 3, 2015 Share Posted June 3, 2015 I like the right one better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SiLeNt WaVe Posted June 4, 2015 Author Share Posted June 4, 2015 Added a few highlights. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WCCILibrary Posted June 4, 2015 Share Posted June 4, 2015 Hmm... the top half (Up to around the eye), on the 2nd one looks better to me, but I like bottom part of the 1st one more.... that seperation just allows the logo to flow more, but the top part of the 1st looks cooler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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