PaperThin Posted June 27, 2015 Share Posted June 27, 2015 While some seagulls have that black stripe on the beak, I would get rid since it looks like its mouth got shut. I would also shorten the dark grey and stripe thingy at the bottom of the right wing to make it equal with the left wing. Finally, I would balance out the outline of the seagull since the outline is thinner and thicker in some place. I really like the idea and where you're heading with this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QThaGAWD Posted June 27, 2015 Author Share Posted June 27, 2015 While some seagulls have that black stripe on the beak, I would get rid since it looks like its mouth got shut. I would also shorten the dark grey and stripe thingy at the bottom of the right wing to make it equal with the left wing. Finally, I would balance out the outline of the seagull since the outline is thinner and thicker in some place. I really like the idea and where you're heading with this.Its a perspective thing. Its not suppose to be equal, the mouth is shut and is suppose to look that way. That is why its not all one color grey, its a shadow effect that i tried out. Again its not suppose to look equal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QThaGAWD Posted June 28, 2015 Author Share Posted June 28, 2015 3 NEW LOGOS (Version 1.0)Las Vegas Silver Aces(Modeled after a poker chip):Albuquerque Dessert Dogs(design not final REALLY need C&C) :El Paso Stars (Modeled after an old school sheriff badge and the El Paso Star on the city seal):THANKS FOR LOOKING! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
13DolphinsFan91 Posted June 28, 2015 Share Posted June 28, 2015 ABQ looks .... awkwardWhy is the Las Vegas logo so big?Anyways everything looks good so far Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QThaGAWD Posted June 28, 2015 Author Share Posted June 28, 2015 ABQ looks .... awkwardWhy is the Las Vegas logo so big?Anyways everything looks good so farthe LV logo is like that because i saved it as a different file type than the other 2 by mistake ill re-upload a smaller one do you have any ideas for Albuquerque because im stumped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted June 28, 2015 Share Posted June 28, 2015 Albu...qzxuy7- shading an eye? right now it looks too empty.The other ones- why more roundels? Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted June 28, 2015 Share Posted June 28, 2015 Ah I see this is gonna be a roundel league, just like the real NBA. I think you can make it work these are good starts. I would not usually say clutter is better, but for ABQ maybe add some mountains or a sun in the background of the roundel, show some of that desert aspect. Vegas looks good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QThaGAWD Posted June 28, 2015 Author Share Posted June 28, 2015 Albu...qzxuy7- shading an eye? right now it looks too empty.The other ones- why more roundels?the albuquerque one was suppose to be just a silhouette but i do think it looks empty so i will try shadingand the reason for roundels is because im a big fan of them but i will try and go away from them in the next logosthank you for your C&CAh I see this is gonna be a roundel league, just like the real NBA. I think you can make it work these are good starts. I would not usually say clutter is better, but for ABQ maybe add some mountains or a sun in the background of the roundel, show some of that desert aspect. Vegas looks goodim gonna try and go away from the roundels im just a big fan of getting the identity of the team across in a big way without doing too much thank you for the suggestion of the mountains as well i will try and come up with an idea that incorporates it and maybe even scrap the roundel. thank you for your C&C it was truly needed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QThaGAWD Posted June 28, 2015 Author Share Posted June 28, 2015 after reading C&C i got straight to drawing decided to make the new verion of the Albu logo into the shape of a belt buckle(simple rectangle/square) i was drawing a new wolf or coyote as well and was using silhouette searches as inspiration but there was this great image i saw and i thought itd be great for the logo so i added it and i want to know if i should keep it or continue with the one i was using before. Darkened the red and yellow: (i added the simple shadow effects to it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramsjetsthunder Posted June 28, 2015 Share Posted June 28, 2015 Great so far on logos, but Seagulls could still use some touchups to make it look more "fierce." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QThaGAWD Posted June 28, 2015 Author Share Posted June 28, 2015 Great so far on logos, but Seagulls could still use some touchups to make it look more "fierce."thank you. what do you suggest? should i change the eye or make it scowl a little more?EDIT: Hows this?i feel like its a little overdone could use more C&C. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QThaGAWD Posted June 29, 2015 Author Share Posted June 29, 2015 Version 1 of NORFOLK CAPTAINS(needs cleaning up but wanted C&C) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
13DolphinsFan91 Posted June 29, 2015 Share Posted June 29, 2015 I can get behind it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QThaGAWD Posted June 29, 2015 Author Share Posted June 29, 2015 I can get behind it.the norfolk design?NORFOLK UPDATE:im still working on a logo for the Norfolk team, i want the logo to include a captain and not just an anchor so i threw this together.C&C welcomed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperThin Posted June 29, 2015 Share Posted June 29, 2015 The R in Norfolk looks a lot like an A, so I would change up the font. The logo is quite plain and doesn't really like a sports logo. I would remove the triangle and make the captain more intimidating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted June 29, 2015 Share Posted June 29, 2015 after reading C&C i got straight to drawing decided to make the new verion of the Albu logo into the shape of a belt buckle(simple rectangle/square) i was drawing a new wolf or coyote as well and was using silhouette searches as inspiration but there was this great image i saw and i thought itd be great for the logo so i added it and i want to know if i should keep it or continue with the one i was using before. Darkened the red and yellow: (i added the simple shadow effects to it)Ahah now I think is the perfect time for a roundel! Just around that sun. BIG IMPROVEMENT. I like moving to the full dog instead of just his head. I think the interior works and is good for a simple logo (which is good), I think you just need to find a way to bring it together. A big box around the logo just doesn't look good. You're very close to getting this one keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramsjetsthunder Posted June 29, 2015 Share Posted June 29, 2015 Great so far on logos, but Seagulls could still use some touchups to make it look more "fierce."thank you. what do you suggest? should i change the eye or make it scowl a little more?EDIT: Hows this?i feel like its a little overdone could use more C&C.Looks better, I would still suggest simplifying the face, as it seems too detailed. Norfolk Captains look great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QThaGAWD Posted June 29, 2015 Author Share Posted June 29, 2015 after reading C&C i got straight to drawing decided to make the new verion of the Albu logo into the shape of a belt buckle(simple rectangle/square) i was drawing a new wolf or coyote as well and was using silhouette searches as inspiration but there was this great image i saw and i thought itd be great for the logo so i added it and i want to know if i should keep it or continue with the one i was using before. Darkened the red and yellow: (i added the simple shadow effects to it)Ahah now I think is the perfect time for a roundel! Just around that sun. BIG IMPROVEMENT. I like moving to the full dog instead of just his head. I think the interior works and is good for a simple logo (which is good), I think you just need to find a way to bring it together. A big box around the logo just doesn't look good. You're very close to getting this one keep up the good work!i was trying to stay away from roundels but i do think youre right in saying this should have one so i'll edit it and post it again later.Great so far on logos, but Seagulls could still use some touchups to make it look more "fierce."thank you. what do you suggest? should i change the eye or make it scowl a little more?EDIT: Hows this?i feel like its a little overdone could use more C&C.Looks better, I would still suggest simplifying the face, as it seems too detailed.Norfolk Captains look great!same thing i said, i think it looks a little overdone compared to the rest of the logo so ill simplify it and repost laterthank you both for your C&C.The R in Norfolk looks a lot like an A, so I would change up the font. The logo is quite plain and doesn't really like a sports logo. I would remove the triangle and make the captain more intimidating.i'll see what i can come up with, thanks for your C&C. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QThaGAWD Posted June 29, 2015 Author Share Posted June 29, 2015 UPDATE(CAPTAINS & SEAGULLS):Captains: tweaked the original design and added elements from the second take. i think it works well and will be the main logo for the team.​Seagulls: Still working on the details to make them noticeable but not too over done, i think i found a common ground. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DCarp1231 Posted June 29, 2015 Share Posted June 29, 2015 How about for Norfolk you do a captain leaning on a boat Wheel (I guess that's what it's called)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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