New Fictional Basketball League, USPBL (Tucson Saguaros new logo and uniforms added.)

[QThaGAWD 18]

Silver Aces Uniform:

[WFBL 3]

Las Vegas Uniforms look great

[QThaGAWD 18]

Omaha Stampede New Logo and uniforms.

Inspiration: Chicago Bulls.

i kept them simple because everything i tried to add on the uniforms looked too overdone , i hope it doesn't look too plain.

C&C appreciated.

[QThaGAWD 18]

NEW COLOR SCHEME: Black and Gold remain Orange is from the Houston Astros 1976 logo.

[sleuthpanther 331]

Just get rid of the little tumor of a basketball on that star and your golden.

[QThaGAWD 18]

Just get rid of the little tumor of a basketball on that star and your golden.

Done and done. slight color tweak what do you think?

i removed the boarder because i felt like the logo had too many lines with it still there, it was there only to mainly support the basketball being in the logo but after you pointed it out it did in fact look a little funky.

[ZionEagle 582]

Actually I think it looks better with the border....and without the "s" altogether. I think people would know it's the stars without the "s" anyway

Needless to say all these teams and logos are stellar. I love to see how much you've improved from your first posts. Well done.

Definitely going to be following this topic closely.

[QThaGAWD 18]

Actually I think it looks better with the border....and without the "s" altogether. I think people would know it's the stars without the "s" anyway

Needless to say all these teams and logos are stellar. I love to see how much you've improved from your first posts. Well done.

Definitely going to be following this topic closely.

i really appreciate the kind words , ive been trying to get better at this and im glad my efforts havent gone unnoticed. i will also look into adding the border again , thank you.

[davidmiller5 126]

I agree that you should get rid of the 's. In addition, the apostrophe shows possession instead of plurality, so you are saying the star has or owns something that is unnamed. (The team name would be the Stars not the Star's.) I hope this makes sense.

[ZionEagle 582]

Agreed.

Also on the jersey, I think it would great if you spaced out the three stars on the stripes.

[QThaGAWD 18]

I agree that you should get rid of the 's. In addition, the apostrophe shows possession instead of plurality, so you are saying the star has or owns something that is unnamed. (The team name would be the Stars not the Star's.) I hope this makes sense.

yea I know and yes it makes complete sense lol I just made changes earlier this morning and haven't gotten around to post them but I will once I make it home again. Thank you.

[QThaGAWD 18]

tweaks according to what you guys wanted to see

[ZionEagle 582]

Much much better. You nailed it

[QThaGAWD 18]

Tucson Saguaros new logo slightly modeled after the 93 Denver Nuggets skyline logo i also droped the two dust brown colors and went with green blue and yellow/golden yellow.

i call it the "Toast" logo because when i was drawing up the new design the border of it started looking like the shape of a piece of toast , so i shortened it and kept the overall design of it.

Tucsons uniforms also drew inspiration from a NBA team the 01 Dallas Mavericks uniforms are some of my favorites so i tried to mimic them but not make it completely accurate.

C&C appreciated.

[Whittier S 420]

I didn't think I'd be sold on the general idea of the logo until I saw how you used it in the uniform, which is fairly effective. That said, your basketball is flat, both because you worked from an ellipse instead of a circle, and because the channels are way off, further making it look deflated. I also think you could cut some of the linework from within the cactus, and in its place experiment with shading, though you'd risk making the palette rather large. Actually, strike that--you've got at least six colors going already. I'd consider ways to simplify.

[QThaGAWD 18]

I didn't think I'd be sold on the general idea of the logo until I saw how you used it in the uniform, which is fairly effective. That said, your basketball is flat, both because you worked from an ellipse instead of a circle, and because the channels are way off, further making it look deflated. I also think you could cut some of the linework from within the cactus, and in its place experiment with shading, though you'd risk making the palette rather large. Actually, strike that--you've got at least six colors going already. I'd consider ways to simplify.

there are only 3 main colors in this logo the other 2 are black and the lines in the ball which is nothing more than a shadow used as lines which are both just accents and are no way part of the color palette i will simply the line work in the cactus and try to get the ball to look better in the next update

[Whittier S 420]

To be precise, your palette has three three main colors (green, blue, yellow) and three supporting colors (black, dark blue, dark yellow) for six total, which does happen--think the yellow eyes and red tongue in the Timberwolves logo--but it's just something you don't want to push too far.

[Bomba Tomba 133]

Silver Aces Uniform:

Dude, white is too close to silver. Darken the silver, or make it the home, then make another color the away?

[QThaGAWD 18]

Silver Aces Uniform:

Dude, white is too close to silver. Darken the silver, or make it the home, then make another color the away?

didnt want to go back and visit this but here ya go i darkened the silver...slightly