NOLAPelicans23 Posted July 1, 2015 Share Posted July 1, 2015 This is my attempt that I made on my ipad it took a day to create if youre not impresed sorry working with ametur stuff. CC appreciated and tell me what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martymcfry Posted July 1, 2015 Share Posted July 1, 2015 Well...this is a start. I would definitely suggest getting this cleaned up with a computer program. Right now I think this has potential. But please, please, please don't do unnecessary gray or black. That would just ruin the look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOLAPelicans23 Posted July 1, 2015 Author Share Posted July 1, 2015 Well...this is a start. I would definitely suggest getting this cleaned up with a computer program. Right now I think this has potential. But please, please, please don't do unnecessary gray or black. That would just ruin the look.I can get rid of the gray but sadly cant post it and thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportzfan Posted July 1, 2015 Share Posted July 1, 2015 this needs a lot of cleaning up, it does look like a elementary school drawing currently Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOLAPelicans23 Posted July 1, 2015 Author Share Posted July 1, 2015 this needs a lot of cleaning up, it does look like a elementary school drawing currentlyBut what do you think. I know it needs cleaning up but the logo itself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted July 1, 2015 Share Posted July 1, 2015 It's a good idea, but it's very difficult to judge this logo without seeing a cleaner execution of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GarryJerryLarry Posted July 2, 2015 Share Posted July 2, 2015 that looks great! once its cleaned up though it would be even better. what did you use to make it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-ROY Posted July 2, 2015 Share Posted July 2, 2015 I have nothing to say about this. Did you really think this was worth posting? The quality is extremely bad. Yes, the idea is interesting but why put this up? This needs A LOT of work before I say anything constructive. Â Â Â Â Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lumbergh Posted July 2, 2015 Share Posted July 2, 2015 The S is completely behind the Space Needle. I would interweave it with the needle to give it more cohesiveness. My biggest advice would be to try and do this hand-drawn and then try to either find someone to vectorize it, or do it yourself. Study logos and take notes on composition, resolution, color, and then you will see why there are negative comments about this. Members are so immersed in good looking concepts and logos and it is very much a competition in the design realm. Push yourself to get better and know that negative comments should drive you to improve, not give up or become defensive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportsherald Posted July 2, 2015 Share Posted July 2, 2015 While I think this is a good, natural concept for any Seattle team, the current presentation is very similar to a dollar sign ($), untentionally or not. Use the rules of heraldry for more effective sports logos! i.e. keep it simple, use good contrast... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOLAPelicans23 Posted July 2, 2015 Author Share Posted July 2, 2015 Thanks for everyone for the great stuff and thanks for telling me about the potential. If you have any ideas on programs to clean this because I'm on a budget of $0.00. I appreciate all the C&C and I'll try to clean this up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOLAPelicans23 Posted July 2, 2015 Author Share Posted July 2, 2015 I have nothing to say about this. Did you really think this was worth posting? The quality is extremely bad. Yes, the idea is interesting but why put this up? This needs A LOT of work before I say anything consThatThat isn't helping me in any way. I knew it needed cleaning up. This is my first concept. I just want to see what I can improve. I understand that your a long time user on this website but everyone gave me some advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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