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Dexter Morgan, July 3, 2015 in General Design
the shading in the face looks weird especially around the bridge of the nose. Id get rid of that, it also kind of looks like he has a huge double chin
What is the 1798 lined up with? I feel like it should be parallel to the bottom of the page.
It looks as though the 1798 is aligned to the person. Both would need to be rotated a few degrees up; it's fine if he's looking slightly upward.
Some things to try:
-try the 1798 below the person.
-try 17 on one side of him, the 98 on the other.
-leave the 1798 as is, and put "Est." or "ESTD" on the left side.
None of these are necessarily better, just different ways of approaching the same problem.
BTW: Love the color pallet!
Thanks for the suggestions guys, though it's a little late to make any changes. I actually posted the wrong logo, the date was removed. For the record, 1798 isn't an establishment date. It's year Wolfe Tone died. Establishment date is actually 2015. Only been open a few months.
I like it. It looks nice juxtaposed with this white background. I'm not certain how much pop it'd have mounted on a dark wall &/or building.