ECUFan25 Posted August 25, 2015 Share Posted August 25, 2015 I'd do uniforms, really want to try out my new 3/4 view SVG template I'm making in a side project, still in the revision process, will be finishing in about a week or so, would require background-less scripts of home away jerseys, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted August 26, 2015 Share Posted August 26, 2015 For the Wizards, I think the stars look disconnected.I love the change in the Mav's, but I think your skull render is off. It doesn't look much like a cow skull to me, due to how you've rendered the bottom half. I think you should move the eyes out a little, straighten out the "cheekbones," and fix the very bottom so it's flatter like a cow's skull. Here's a reference image to show you more of what I'm describing: Right now what you have looks a little bit more like a demon beast than a cow- which is cool, but doesn't really convey that it's supposed to be "Western" or "Texan" laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted August 27, 2015 Author Share Posted August 27, 2015 For the Wizards, I think the stars look disconnected.I love the change in the Mav's, but I think your skull render is off. It doesn't look much like a cow skull to me, due to how you've rendered the bottom half. I think you should move the eyes out a little, straighten out the "cheekbones," and fix the very bottom so it's flatter like a cow's skull. Here's a reference image to show you more of what I'm describing: Right now what you have looks a little bit more like a demon beast than a cow- which is cool, but doesn't really convey that it's supposed to be "Western" or "Texan"I appreciate what you're saying, but I chalk this one up to "stylistic interpretation." It's like Finding Nemo. Fish don't have two front facing eyes, but they do in the movie so you can see both eyes when they look at you. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silence of the Rams Posted August 27, 2015 Share Posted August 27, 2015 For the Wizards, I think the stars look disconnected.I love the change in the Mav's, but I think your skull render is off. It doesn't look much like a cow skull to me, due to how you've rendered the bottom half. I think you should move the eyes out a little, straighten out the "cheekbones," and fix the very bottom so it's flatter like a cow's skull. Here's a reference image to show you more of what I'm describing: Right now what you have looks a little bit more like a demon beast than a cow- which is cool, but doesn't really convey that it's supposed to be "Western" or "Texan"I appreciate what you're saying, but I chalk this one up to "stylistic interpretation." It's like Finding Nemo. Fish don't have two front facing eyes, but they do in the movie so you can see both eyes when they look at you.I get it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted August 30, 2015 Share Posted August 30, 2015 I like the Mavs. It seems to have ghost eyes and this type of imagery would be very different than anything the NBA currently uses.If you're still looking for feedback on the Hornets, I'd say this is a miss. Not because it's rendered badly, because it's a solid design, but it just looks like a generic insect face and nothing about it says "hornet" or "bee". The honeycomb C is a nice idea, but I think we need to see some wings or a stinger to really get the whole idea that this is unmistakably a hornet. If your up for it, you could add the abdomen portion of the body under/behind the C and the wings on the side.Just an observation: A lot of the word marks have letters extending as underlines (Lakers, Mavs, Hornets), which is a fine idea, but if half the teams use it, it loses its distinction. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted September 2, 2015 Author Share Posted September 2, 2015 Thanks for the CC on the Hornets - I'll try and get to it when things slow down a little bit for me. In the mean time, here's the T-Wolves! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JMtexan09 Posted September 2, 2015 Share Posted September 2, 2015 whoa that looks good FEAR THE FROG! LET'S GO TCU!! Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PackerFan98 Posted September 2, 2015 Share Posted September 2, 2015 That's awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted September 3, 2015 Share Posted September 3, 2015 Wow, Minnesota looks great. The ears kind of look like mountains, or M's. Was that intentional? Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted September 3, 2015 Author Share Posted September 3, 2015 Wow, Minnesota looks great. The ears kind of look like mountains, or M's. Was that intentional? Thanks! And yep! M's in the ears! Any chance I can weave in something hidden like that, I will. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittSmith_95 Posted September 3, 2015 Share Posted September 3, 2015 My issue with the face on the Wolves is that i don't think you need the half-shadowed part of the face to make the logo work. BTW, That Mavs logo... like, why not just call Cuban right now? That's perfection in every which way, and even makes sense with the name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted September 9, 2015 Author Share Posted September 9, 2015 Here's a tweak on the Hornets! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted September 11, 2015 Author Share Posted September 11, 2015 Here's Orlando My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadojoker Posted September 11, 2015 Share Posted September 11, 2015 Here's the wildly different Mavericks!This is perfect I'm so surprised no one has thought of this yet!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadojoker Posted September 11, 2015 Share Posted September 11, 2015 Here's a tweak on the Hornets!Hope you enjoy Charlotte's new look!Love both logos but the wordmark in the first one (at the bottom) is lot better than the recent tweak (at the top with the purple). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BKarchitect Posted September 11, 2015 Share Posted September 11, 2015 Here's OrlandoSuperb. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadojoker Posted September 12, 2015 Share Posted September 12, 2015 Here's Orlando Superb.This is gorgeous too!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silence of the Rams Posted September 12, 2015 Share Posted September 12, 2015 Disney would be proud Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittSmith_95 Posted September 12, 2015 Share Posted September 12, 2015 I like the look of the Magic logo, but what is it exactly? You can in fact describe Magic, you know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted September 15, 2015 Author Share Posted September 15, 2015 I like the look of the Magic logo, but what is it exactly? You can in fact describe Magic, you know. It's an abstract basketball with sparkles and tendrils to induce feelings of "magic." The other route was to go hokey - top hat and magic wand. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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