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wquarton

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Thanks, I'll make all those changes. Started using adobe illustrator and although overall it's amazing, but there are still some things that I'm learning(the arcing specifically)

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as promised. Hoping that looks better. Actually had to tilt the london ever so slightly. those arcs are tough to nail. Also, added the black outline at the request of someone on r/london, not sure how I feel about it - maybe keep it on the outline and ditch it on the tree. thoughts?

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The progress you have made from the first design to this last one is incredible. Also a big fan of the color scheme and usage of the squirrel. I'd suggest altering the squirrel's chest area to be a little wider. To me, the squirrel stomach looks stretched upright, almost looking anorexic. The head shape also could use a bit of work on the top. It lost a bit of its squirrel vibe, and almost looks like a fire is on its head.

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If you are using Illustrator you should be able to draw paths that you can type along. That should really help with the text issues; just make sure your paths mirror the bottom of the banners.

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