flyersfan Posted September 5, 2015 Share Posted September 5, 2015 Simple design here, just made a white jersey. tell me what you think! the shoulder design with the stripe is inspired by white hart lane, where the team plays their home games. I was thinking about blue pants but it ruined the stripe idea. this was done with inkscape. please leave C&C! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted September 5, 2015 Author Share Posted September 5, 2015 heres where the inspiration is from if you guys were wondering. I outlined it in the lime green. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1insaneguy Posted September 5, 2015 Share Posted September 5, 2015 Maybe they aren't visible from this view, but I can't see any TV numbers. Also, why not just make it a regular yoke instead of having that line?EDIT: I see the inspiration, but it still looks off to me. One final thing as well: Are you going to do a blue jersey? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted September 5, 2015 Author Share Posted September 5, 2015 I meant to put in the TV numbers. I'll add them in pronto. And yes a blue will be coming along with an alt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted September 6, 2015 Author Share Posted September 6, 2015 Here's an update: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jrcollis714 Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 I like this a lot, but I have a few questions. Will you be making a blue away? And what does it say on the inside of the collar? Favorites: Dallas Cowboys, New York Yankees, New York Rangers, New York Knicks, Cam Newton ND Irish Least Favorites: New York Giants, New York Mets, Washington Capitals, Pittsburgh Penguins, Philadelphia Eagles, OBJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veras Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 The numbers on the front look really low, probably because the chest logo is far too large. I would say that the jersey doesn't need a logo, given that you already have it on the pants and helmet, but if you really want to include it, I'd shift it to the side, like the Steelers and jets do. Another option would be to replace it with a wordmark, but I honestly think it would be better without either, and 9 of the 32 NFL teams don't have any kind of team logo or wordmark on their jersey, so it wouldn't be unprecedented. I also think that the numbers on the front and aback are to big. I'm trying to envision a number like 88, and it seems like it world be a tight fit. History of a Fictional Football League (1989) Thread - Logos - Uniforms - History Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted September 7, 2015 Author Share Posted September 7, 2015 I'll fix the number side and placement. The inside of the collar says: "to dare is to do" which is a team motto. And COYS on the back is referring to "come on you spurs" which is basically their chant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted September 7, 2015 Author Share Posted September 7, 2015 Yes, blue and an alternate or two will be made as wel. They are currently in progress I apologize for so many posts, but I think the NFL needs some simple teams. Like the Browns look was great. So was the bucs. They were simple but fit in. That was my goal here. To be unique, but keep it very simple. I hope it's not too bland for you guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted September 8, 2015 Author Share Posted September 8, 2015 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted September 9, 2015 Author Share Posted September 9, 2015 Here's updated white:New blue:Alt version 1?Alt version 2? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1insaneguy Posted September 9, 2015 Share Posted September 9, 2015 Not a fan of the alternates, but I like what you did with the Home and away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted September 10, 2015 Author Share Posted September 10, 2015 Should I try grey for the alts then? I took a vector template and changed it to a paint friendly one. If anyone wants it DM me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted September 10, 2015 Share Posted September 10, 2015 Also not a fan of the alts...maybe because I hate the Titans uniforms.The home and away would make a great uniform for Penn State if they ever decide to dump the Paterno look. Just replace the logo with a cougar (aka nittany lion) and it's perfect for them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marble21 Posted September 10, 2015 Share Posted September 10, 2015 Of all the things to take inspiration from, your choice didn't immediately spring to my mind as something uniquely Tottenham - particularly as the club are about to knock down the stadium and rebuild it.In recent years, Under Armour have used the cockerel on top of the west stand and the Bill Nicholson gates for inspiration. Maybe look into that or even check out this link of a competition the club is running at the moment: http://www.tottenhamhotspur.com/photographer-of-the-season/. You could also use google street view to look around the local area of the stadium and see if anything catches your eye.I also find it a bit weird that the cockerel on the helmet is facing backwards. UBI FIDES IBI LUX ET ROBUR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted September 10, 2015 Author Share Posted September 10, 2015 would grey be ok for an alt? Or would it be too gfgs? Also, the cockerel can't be flipped imo, that's why its backwards. Does the collar look good on them? And penn state (me being a fan of them) is too traditional for that to happen. Anyways, it would be a good fit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted September 11, 2015 Author Share Posted September 11, 2015 Should I change the color of the front collar with the flywire to the color of the jersey? Or leave it as is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted September 13, 2015 Author Share Posted September 13, 2015 Grey alt: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1insaneguy Posted September 13, 2015 Share Posted September 13, 2015 The pants stripe looks bad. I'm sorry, but it just does. The grey alt looks a lot like something Old Dominion University would wear. I say stick to home and away as those were you're best designs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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