RyanB03 Posted December 5, 2015 Share Posted December 5, 2015 Hello guys! I've seen a lot of redesign topics on here and decided to start my own! This is also my first ever topic here . Please feel free to suggest things for changing to make these look better. So without further ado, here is Arizona and Atlanta!Teams Done:ArizonaAtlantaBaltimoreBuffaloCarolinaChicagoCincinnatiClevelandDallasDenverArizona:Went with red facemask instead of greyHave Arizona flag on shoulders, recolored to match color scheme (yellow from Cardinal beak)Three line stripe on pantsAtlanta:Went with red helmet and black facemask (dark grey, really, just so we can see the outline)Shoulder logo is top part of Atlanta's logoPant stripe is also from logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H11K Posted December 5, 2015 Share Posted December 5, 2015 Thats about as good as it can get for Arizona, except for the number outlines. The black outline just muddles it up IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canuckleball Posted December 5, 2015 Share Posted December 5, 2015 I think AZ needs a wordmark. And both the names and wordmark need to be larger, they look oddly small Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramsjetsthunder Posted December 5, 2015 Share Posted December 5, 2015 Falcons: Feels blank, needs TV numbers and additional "wing" stripe. Needs thicker number outlines.Cardinals: Take off black number outline if black wont be used majorly anywhere else. I would suggest taking out the yellow though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luke13T Posted December 5, 2015 Share Posted December 5, 2015 Does every Cardinals concept have the AZ flag on the sleeves? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted December 6, 2015 Share Posted December 6, 2015 darken the red on the falcons, there red is almost the exact red for the cardinals you have Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanB03 Posted December 6, 2015 Author Share Posted December 6, 2015 Redid Arizona and AtlantaArizona:Made chest wordmark largerTook out black outline on numberAtlanta:Added chest wordmarkAdded shoulder numbersDarkened redAnd would anyone be kind enough to tell me how to edit the topic title I checked the help topics but couldn't find anything... I'm new to this stuff so cut me some slack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittSmith_95 Posted December 6, 2015 Share Posted December 6, 2015 Cards- Try using Navy over Black to execute the flag better. Falcons- This is really nice. I like the light red, the pant stripe, etc. But the arm stripe is slightly too minimal for my liking, and the number font is too small. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nas1787 Posted December 6, 2015 Share Posted December 6, 2015 And would anyone be kind enough to tell me how to edit the topic title I checked the help topics but couldn't find anything... I'm new to this stuff so cut me some slackEdit the first post in the topic. Use the full editor option.Good start BTW Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanB03 Posted December 6, 2015 Author Share Posted December 6, 2015 And would anyone be kind enough to tell me how to edit the topic title I checked the help topics but couldn't find anything... I'm new to this stuff so cut me some slackEdit the first post in the topic. Use the full editor option.Good start BTWAlright, thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted December 6, 2015 Share Posted December 6, 2015 Awesome looks good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carolingian Steamroller Posted December 6, 2015 Share Posted December 6, 2015 I would switch the direction of the sleeve "wings" on the Falcons. In their current iteration they are going back to front. On the logo the narrower end faces front. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beernuts89 Posted December 6, 2015 Share Posted December 6, 2015 Love the concepts but i think there needs to be a red stripe with maybe a thin black stripe for cardinals helmets.As for the Falcons not a fan of the red helmet. Way to much red. Love the design in the falcons pants though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jrcollis714 Posted December 6, 2015 Share Posted December 6, 2015 Agree with above comment about Falcons helmets. Make them black, or maybe experiment with white (wink, wink). Also with the Falcons, those pants. I think the wing was a good idea, but it is far too thick. Either make it thinner or just continue with the current striping pattern. Otherwise, nice work. Favorites: Dallas Cowboys, New York Yankees, New York Rangers, New York Knicks, Cam Newton ND Irish Least Favorites: New York Giants, New York Mets, Washington Capitals, Pittsburgh Penguins, Philadelphia Eagles, OBJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanB03 Posted December 6, 2015 Author Share Posted December 6, 2015 Next up, we have the Baltimore Ravens. I went with a purple helmet this time instead of black or charcoal grey, whatever you want to call it, because I wanted more color into this design. I kept the main design of the current jersey, but swapped the arm logos out from the "Maryland Flag" ones to their alternate "B" logo. I did black pants instead of their white and used a "White-Yellow-Purple-Yellow-White" stripe on the pants. I used a fair amount of yellow on the uniform because I didn't really like how the purple and black went with each other (home sock), so that's also why there's a yellow helmet stripe, but I'm not sure I really like the look of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted December 6, 2015 Share Posted December 6, 2015 I would go black stripe on helemt, other than that i like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WavePunter Posted December 6, 2015 Share Posted December 6, 2015 I'd keep the black lid, but otherwise, I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H11K Posted December 6, 2015 Share Posted December 6, 2015 Is that the same font as the falcons?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanB03 Posted December 6, 2015 Author Share Posted December 6, 2015 Is that the same font as the falcons??No, the Ravens one is their wordmark from their page on this website and the Falcons one I got from this website which I got from here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittSmith_95 Posted December 6, 2015 Share Posted December 6, 2015 The logo is too small for the helmet. But I love the direction taken here.... that set looks really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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